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I manage to draw 5 page this time. It become longer than I want but I don't want to end it to end on cliff hanger.  Well can't help it now i suppose.

Anyway if find any grammar mistake and want to help fixing it feel free to post it in the comment.

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Tay Altrus

Caint wait for the full colored Release...

Schnitzel

I'm beginning to be a big fan of the "mouth gets cracked when they open wide" style. It's unsettling in a cool way, like when Gilda did it.

Theerawee

Yeah All hope has lost like the wind in summer But I hope her personality are survived in the Darkness of Control System แต่จบแล้วใช่ป่ะ?

Exa

tasty sword

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2026-09-05 06:00 Ooh, so the June fragment is probably in that stolen sample. I hope the sample gets away or atleast the doc finds out who sent the assassin which leads to the woman who will become Iron & part 3 one day. Cool action btw! Love the fun dynamic the doc & prima have
2023-04-26 18:27 Ooh, so the June fragment is probably in that stolen sample. I hope the sample gets away or atleast the doc finds out who sent the assassin which leads to the woman who will become Iron & part 3 one day. Cool action btw! Love the fun dynamic the doc & prima have

Ooh, so the June fragment is probably in that stolen sample. I hope the sample gets away or atleast the doc finds out who sent the assassin which leads to the woman who will become Iron & part 3 one day. Cool action btw! Love the fun dynamic the doc & prima have

ibenz009

จูนอยู่ใหนหลอดครับ โดนแบ่งออกมาเป็นสองเวอร์ชั่น

Theerawee

ขอบคุณเพ่ อย่างน้อยก็มีบทต่ออีกยาว

StarGazer

Lol, love how she's rather rough but still obedient enough to apologise for it

CrazedGamma1721

So June is in the missing fragment. Hope she gets her body back.

Pascal

cool

Adolfo

June's personality was divided in two, I guess it will be the key for her to recover her body in the future, recover Miller in a certain way and get revenge. Personally I would prefer that Prima and Secunda turn all humanity into liquid metal girls, creating a new race capable of reproducing, you know, "living beings" are born, develop, reproduce and die.

Nobody-Kadaj

Given that Amelia has shown numerous sociopathic traits, it's unlikely she ever thought that far ahead. As far as she's concerned, she'd likely make them nigh-immortal just so they would serve her while she's alive and revere her after she passes away.

Kauko Firetale (edited)

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2026-09-05 06:00 some grammar corrections! love these pages. "What you are doing" -> "What are you doing" "Perhaps he's trying to keep me occupied" "Damage are minimal" -> "Damage is minimal" "nanite mass is neglectable" -> "nanite mass is negligible" "is register as" -> "is registered as" "Prima Secunda capture and eliminated that" -> "Prima, Secunda, capture and eliminate that" (or "Prima. Secunda." depending on tone of voice) "bio metal life form exist" -> "bio metal life forms exist" "your will are absolute" -> "your will is absolute" "successfully retrieve the" -> "successfully retrieved the"
2023-04-27 01:46 some grammar corrections! love these pages. "What you are doing" -> "What are you doing" "Perhaps he's trying to keep me occupied" "Damage are minimal" -> "Damage is minimal" "nanite mass is neglectable" -> "nanite mass is negligible" "is register as" -> "is registered as" "Prima Secunda capture and eliminated that" -> "Prima, Secunda, capture and eliminate that" (or "Prima. Secunda." depending on tone of voice) "bio metal life form exist" -> "bio metal life forms exist" "your will are absolute" -> "your will is absolute" "successfully retrieve the" -> "successfully retrieved the"

some grammar corrections! love these pages. "What you are doing" -> "What are you doing" "Perhaps he's trying to keep me occupied" "Damage are minimal" -> "Damage is minimal" "nanite mass is neglectable" -> "nanite mass is negligible" "is register as" -> "is registered as" "Prima Secunda capture and eliminated that" -> "Prima, Secunda, capture and eliminate that" (or "Prima. Secunda." depending on tone of voice) "bio metal life form exist" -> "bio metal life forms exist" "your will are absolute" -> "your will is absolute" "successfully retrieve the" -> "successfully retrieved the"

Rökkr Ragnarok

I hope they assimilate more~ I love how you design each character and how they change~

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 Ever considered an editor for the story?