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Liquid mercury RE ch2 p13-14 (Patreon)

Published:
2023-10-29 18:28:11
Edited:
2023-11-19 12:28:32
Imported:
2026-06
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I've manage to finished this before the end of the month. Another 2 page done.

Smol June is finally get colored. As always if find any mistake please tell me in the comment.

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StarGazer

Oh they're coming along very well!

kurogetsui

Prima's reply should read "your vision has no flaws mistress" or "your vision is flawless mistress" if you want it to flow a bit better. But the first sounds a bit more formal and robotic.

Nepisa

Love the update! Here's my few suggestions in [bracket]: Page 1: insufficient nanite volume to sustain[] the artificial muscle system Page 2: Register[ing] new app[ea]rance... Restriction of second unit['s] nanite usage is []a success mistress [Doesn't] she look great Prima? Your vision [has] no flaw[s] mistress. I even surprise[] myself sometime[s].

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 You're getting there! Keep it up!

Arbiter

Secunda Silver has been born! ^^

Florian75

I like that she blushes

Eddie

Page 14, upper right pannel "Isn't she look great, Prima?" should be "Doesn't she look great, Prima?" 2nd one "Your vision have no flaw mistress." should be "Your vision has no flaw, mistress." Enjoying your work, keep it up!

Eddie

Have you seen my suggestions with improvements on the text?

ibenz009

Yes! thank you for your help.