Chapter 2 Clean Ups (Patreon)

I cleaned up a few pages from chapter 2. The PDF version of chapter 2 has also been updated with these pages.

Again, when I started making this comic, my priority was to move forward as fast as possible. As a result, the early art was much rougher. I think that this was important in getting the ball rolling. Now, however, I feel that I've settled on a level of quality that strikes a balance between speed and not looking too bad, and I'd like the early chapters' quality to be somewhat consistent with that standard. These will be the first pages that new readers see and I don't want to scare those readers off. Scaring them off should come later!
I plan on cleaning up some other pages before I start posting the comic publicly.