Chapter 1 Revamp (Patreon)

I know that I said before that I wouldn't go back and clean up the earlier chapters

then did so anyways

then said I wouldn't do it again

then did so anyways

then said I was definitely done for sure.

Anyways, I completely redrew chapter 1.

Well, not completely, but it was a major overhaul. I figured that it was necessary though, considering it's the first impression new readers will get. At the very least, the art is now consistent with future chapters, so that's nice. I even redid all the lettering, which--depending on who you ask--might be even more important than the art.

You can re-read chapter 1 with the new visuals through the attached PDF, or you can go here. For posterity, I've also attached the old version of this chapter. It's interesting to look at the differences.

Also, I re-lettered and redrew portions of chapter 2 and chapter 3. I'll make posts for them too, but you can find their updated PDF's here.