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Honestly, I’m not a 100% satisfied with the shadings here, but I guess that for this one it is as good as it's gonna get. I’m not entirely sure what’s off. But every time I tried to fix it, I just make it worst.

I still need more practice and probably a class or two ^^

It is still a good piece none the less.
I hope you guys dig it!
Alx

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Ferawyn

I don't think the poses work. The Orion girl looks like her hips are twisted weirdly, almost rubber-spine level. Her left leg ends up seeming far thinner than her right. And the other girl seems to have an impossibly long right upper leg, reaching all the way to the left of the image.

alxr34

yeah... that was all in the refence pose... but I noticed... I was fine with it but it did fucked me up while I was rendering the lights. I didn't use the same light source as my reference ( although it was similar ) and I kindda got lost somewhere.

Supreme Overlord Llama

The lighting seems off? Overall I still like it though. Nice to some Lower Decks art.

Didi Solomon

Interesting. Like that you're experimenting. The darks seem a little deep on my computers -- obscuring the details of the drawing rather than enhancing them. Something to watch out for.

Reybacca

Looks good to m <3 Love it! Im digging it.

Tracy Scops

Honestly, I still prefer your old style. But you're aiming for excellence and to learn is to live, so I'll say go for it. I just think that right now the characters look a bit too rubbery, like they're made of artificial materials instead of being organic beings.