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This took surprisingly long, but I dig it!
Hope you guys do too.
Alx

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Supreme Overlord Llama

Whoa, she must be spanking pretty good to leave a print like that. Nice team.

Lazarus0024

Great work man!! (maybe we could see America Chavez and Kamala Khan next? 👀👀)

DMLA

Carol's chest and belly area look a bit odd. Anybody else notice that?

DMLA

The more I look, the more I notice how off Carol looks. Her body just doesn't look right. (Edit) Figured it out: Carol looks rather manish. Her torso and hips have no real curves to them and her chest seems unusually flat. Also, her breast looks like it's in the middle of her chest. That's just weird looking.

alxr34

yeah.... I think I've put too much light on it I'll fix that today before starting a new pic

Reybacca

Ho yeah! Im digging it harder! <3

alxr34

I fixed the light. I disagree on the position of the breast. She's leaning forward, her fleshy bag of fat is pulled forward accordingly. As for the mannish look, as usual I used a reference picture: Ryan Ryans in this case. I agree she's a bit more "square" than your usual model (but damn if she doesn't do it for me ^^) and, in insight, it translated a bit weird once in drawing. Also, that jacket is a bit of a problem. It "falls" weird, and the shoulder pads add to her built. Thanks for the notes, I'll keep that in mind in the future.

DMLA

The fixed lighting does help with making her breast placement look more correct. The shadows made it look a bit odd. Also, I see what you meant by the the jacket. It does make her body look a bit square-built. Especially when it's opened.

David

I think it looks great!