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About the next video (Patreon)

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2019-08-14 06:06:24
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2026-06
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Ok I've been thinking on making the next video using the motion I am currently making and the next outfits, but this time I will be making something with a bit of plot, I've never really planed what I do in my videos I just made them as ideas came to my mind, this time the idea came early, it is very simple and the is still time to polish it but here is a draft I made on how it is going to be, and let's me make a follow up, the plan is that the follow up is gonna be a "music videos" of sorts and it gonna be an orgy, let me know what you think.

starts with someone giving a love letter to Izumi

cut to regular days montage with her friends but glancing at the guy

with a somewhat guilty/embarrassed look, the teacher scolds them in 

several shots, asks Izumi to stay behind, what happens next is unseen

cut to another day 

the same guy is talking to her the take is from the guy's POV, Izumi 

blushes she is happy and exited, what happens next is unseen.

cut to Izumi having sex on a hotel, the male can't be seen

mixed with shots of Izumi commuting and talking to the guy

several shots of her having sex and the male is still unseen

cut to the guy looking for her to go home together, he finds her

friends near the entrance of a school room but they tell him the 

don't know where she is, and that she might have gone home already

the door is slightly open and we can see the teacher is the one

having sex with Izumi

it is now revealed that the first time that the teacher asked her

to stay back he fondled her and made her cum, she liked it and agreed to

have sex just once, just tonight, now the it is revelaed that the male she was 

having sex with in a hotel was the teacher

cut to a montage of how the teacher had sex with her several times

in school, in Izumi's house, school changing room, pool and beach

cut to the guy looking for her again but this time he sees Izumi

sucking the teacher's dick and he goes away, Izumi swallows and gets a facial

cut to Izumi and the guy talking and admitting what she has done, she didn’t know 

how to tell him and couldn’t refuse her teacher since it felt too good, it’s not that she

doesn’t like the guy or that she was planning on going out with the teacher but then

her friends come into frame and convince the guy to go with them to a party

this is to make for the what they did, the teacher is there too and explained he

didn't know about their relationship, the guy agrees and offers his house

he looks at Izumi and both smile

to be continued...

Comments

Takuya Sawatari

Sorry, this hits way too close to home. I got bullied by power tripping teachers, got beaten up by a power tripping teacher when I was 8 years old, lost my girlfriend when I was 14 because my teachers turned me into an emotional cripple, culminating with my principal telling me to my face that I should please kill myself. I can ignore NTR plots to a certain extend to enjoy the sex scenes out of context, but I might not be able to watch this one. Just the old memories stir up so much old hate and sadness. If you really decide to make this, please don't turn it into canon. I don't want Izumi to be a slut.

Ademar440

Interesting, how would you spin it to make it less NTR, I thought I made it light, I mean I've played thug hero party and NTRPG2 and I loved them mostly because I never connect with the MC and I like to see FMC drop their childish mask and let themselves go, but that is just me, I don't see Izumi as a slut since she never used her charm to get what she wants, she just likes sex, for some reason NTR stories always have very hot girls and the rush of being found out gives pleasure a boost, maybe getting rid of the guy that likes Izumi and leaving the teacher.

Takuya Sawatari

I'm glad you don't plan to turn her into a slut. Her liking sex is not bad, but the NTR part, with her ignoring the feelings of the guy who loves her, would make her seem really mean. Not a girl I would ever trust again. Getting rid of the guy would make it much better. I'm still not thrilled about the teacher, though I guess I can just watch it out of context. Leaving the male character's role a little more vague would allow each viewer to interpret the scenes to their liking. E.g. you could leave it undefined if the guy asking Izumi to stay after school is a teacher, student or even the janitor. Overall I'm not a big fan of (too much) story in the hentai I watch, since it leaves less room to insert my own fantasies, often requiring me to ignore the story and watch the sex scenes out of context. Otherwise in many cases too much story makes it hard to project myself into the male character. Most of the stuff I watched over the past 10 years has been doujin animations for that reason, since they leave more room to insert my own fantasies. My favorite "professional" R-18 anime is Chichinoya's Issho ni H Shiyo!, since it leaves the male character only vaguely defined. E.g. the Akina episode (best girl!) just establishes that Akina is friends with the male character, and ends up at his front door, wanting to crash on his couch for the night, since she was partying nearby. It's mostly presented in first person or over the shoulder and 3/4 side views, without showing the guy's face, essentially like in H-games. If you want to keep some of the NTR feel, you could use voyeuristic views. E.g. using a long focal length (narrow angle of view) while showing out of focus objects in front of the camera to indicate that the viewer is hiding. It would be awesome if you made separate "voyeuristic camera" and "pov/over the shoulder camera" versions. Though I guess the views could be mixed if 2 versions is too much work. For the thrill of being found out, if you want to keep the school setting, you could establish a group of friends for Izumi that could walk in on her having sex. If it's a classroom a friend could walk in to get something she forgot in her desk, while Izumi and her partner keep having sex, trying to stay quiet while barely hidden. Alternatively sex in public locations is nice for thrills I think. Just barely out of view while people go about their daily business a few meters away, or even in plain view, with only dark lighting barely obscuring their horny activities. Photo booths are a classic, with only a flimsy curtain blocking the view. Behind a row of lockers at a train station could work. Or inside one of those semi private booths with half-height walls, that Japanese internet cafes have.

Ademar440

hmm the locations I mentioned are stages that I already have so there are some that you said that I honestly haven't seen at all, I have a couple karaoke rooms though, about the multiple camera angles I can do that, I can even make a VR one from an unrelated peeper or something, about the story, I really don’t want to make it heavy on story either, I just wanted a bit of context to make the sex scenes a bit better. “Story in a game is like a story in a porn movie. It's expected to be there, but it's not that important “ -John Carmack I however still want to give a bit of context to the video, I’ve seen that ova you mentioned and yes she is the best girl in the series, I knew beforehand that not many people would be with me on the NTR since it is not that popular (yet), I guess I’ll dig on my “reference” folder for new inspiration, I still have plenty of time, I will have to go way back though since vanilla makes me roll my eyes and aside from the cheating/NTR aspect the other genres rarely make me feel anything at all, I will try to make it work though.

VR AnimeTed

Oh wow, interesting to see you getting into story driven experiences. I'm excited to see what it looks like.

Takuya Sawatari

Thank you for taking my feedback seriously. I'm not sure if NTR will ever reach high popularity, since being cheated on feels really horrible. One big reason for my negative reaction to the NTR idea is also that, since Izumi is your character, whatever you create feels like it officially establishes her character traits. I've liked her for many years now, so she is not some dude's random OC anymore. I'm not sure how other people think about this. I'm not against a bit of context, but I'm completely "type-B" when it comes to anime. The philosophy being that the character shouldn't be sacrificed for the sake of the story, but that the character should be the important part and the story should be there to make the character more enjoyable. I've been thinking about how I could improve my videos with a bit more detailed context myself. I don't understand why you think vanilla is boring. Personally I think a lot of MMD sex scenes are not very interesting myself, but I like vanilla, so I try to spice things up using technical improvements, like simulated touching or animated fluids. I still think the vanilla scenes you made with Izumi are nice and enjoy imagining to be in the male position. If you want to spice things up with fetishes, my suggestions would be fetishes that are adventurous or mischievous in nature, but not malicious ones that make her less likable. When I watched your Gokuraku Jodo video today I really loved how Izumi tried to get away with keeping her panties on at the end. The body language and facial expressions gave her a lot of character and made her really likeable. When she removed the panties while making eye contact, it felt so nice and intimate that I actually wished the camera had stayed in the full shot with her face visible, instead of cutting to the panty closeup. Maybe you could experiment more with body language and expressions like that? The locations I suggested for the public sex idea are just places that came to mind from different h-anime and real-life places that gave me ideas. Some would need to be made from scratch, though in many cases might only require adding props to existing stages. I remembered a stage with a train station, called Toyokura, and experimented a bit with it. The station only has a single platform, no station building and lockers like I imagined. So I swapped the locations of some benches and a vending machine to create my "barely out of view" place. Here is a mockup how this could look: https://imgur.com/a/qkllHVg

Ademar440

Yeah well after 4 people tell me that they don't like NTR I just will make some changes to make it more appealing, no biggie I now it is not a very popular fetish (yet), I just enjoy the sex scenes on the genre, I will come up with something while I work, about vanilla, the reason I don’t find it that appealing is that I find it to be that exiting is that because is always seems that the girl is putting up an act, is seems dishonest to me, most of the time anyway, NTR in the other hand seems more genuine how the girl ends up liking it a lot, but that’s just me, I’ll make a new post when I come up with a new draft, thanks for the input btw.