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P. 3 - P. 4

Note: I will amend the details, such as the Kyoshi's scars & background, and reupload P1 & P2 later.

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ImperatorsLicht

Ooooo very nice 🥰🥰😍😍 Your art is always the very best Marceline 😍😍 I fucking love the nipple play too 💦💦 Sucking, and pinching, and biting 😫😫

Naamah Lampert

Omg this is perfect I can't wait for the rest!! Spectacular job!!

Hessbae

😈😈😈

bubblijr

Cheesus crispy I will never be over them😩😩😩

Bri_The_Tree_Woods

I would sell my soul for this full scene to be played out (happy endings and all 😈) I love all the little details in your drawings- like the freckles all over Kyoshi's body and Rangi's scars- ughhhhh your art is poetry ❤️

Naamah Lampert

If I could dance in the comments I would

Zhenlin

Ohhhh my goodness 😍😍 possessive Rangi, because that’s her Kyoshi 😍😍

DayanaB2INN

Oh~ 🫦💕 The question really did something to me, I can't wait to see what Rangi is going to answer. This is really nice Marceline, I am really enjoying reading this comic, and I don't mean just the nsfw part, but the whole thing it's really good, the dialogue, the drawings (specially).

maezanilla (edited)

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2026-09-07 08:00 I’ve been so looking forward to this continuation, and it did not disappoint! 😭💕 it’s so sweet, omg!
2025-08-17 14:00

Airbuilder7

"Can't talk, I'm devouring your titties"

lacy

ahhhh I love this sooo much 😍😍

Nix

Oh Rangi is ENJOYING her meal

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Staring at the blinking cursor, but I find myself a bit speechless. (Chef, that wasn’t an egg, that was my brain!) Uh. Right, words. Use words. Rangi, worshipping Kyoshi like the true believer she is. Rangi isn’t a selfish person. Stubborn, but not selfish. She’s been all but patient…so this possessiveness, want, and hunger that she’s finally able to express is so…well-deserved. For the both of them! The dialogue continuing from P1&2 is so intimate, so honest. Hands hands hands! Touching is a language and god you execute this SO well. Fingertips digging into the side of Kyoshi’s neck, the gentle squeeze of her breast, hands splayed over abdomen and chest. Kyoshi touching Rangi’s hair will always be a favorite, and her hand sneaking its way between their bodies to cup Rangi from the side…😮‍💨 Even if the answer may be “No”, I could imagine Kyoshi telling her, “I’ll make you forget anyone else that came before me.” 🫠 If you keep this up, a séance may have to be performed to get me to comment from beyond the grave. 🪦

Marceline2174

​The first two parts of P1 & P2 were started after only finishing The Rise of Kyoshi, so they didn't really reflect the emotional state after the two girls started dating (?). I had to change the overall content after reading The Shadow of Kyoshi, so the continuation was a bit late😭. AAAND YESSS It's so nice that you noticed!!! You're right, Rangi is stubborn but absolutely always puts Kyoshi first, to the point of surprising Kyoshi herself. Even though her honor is so important to her, she doesn't think about her own honor when it comes to Kyoshi. Even though she's lived her whole life trying not to be 'nothing' and to elevate the Sei'naka clan, she tells Kyoshi that she doesn't care what happens to her own honor while they were with daofei, and she even smiled at Kyoshi when she thoght she was about to die....so YES Rangi has her right to say something like that to Kyoshi at the moment of their first experience😭​Kyoshi is also unhesitant in expressing her love. While she might not be possessive, if she hears a question like that from Rangi, a new sense of possessiveness will naturally arise. They would be unhesitant in touching or kissing each other and would have no shame in claiming each other🥺🩷❤️🤍 Shameless and unhesitant lovebirds" would be the perfect words for them. I'm working hard on the content that follows, so please bear with me, dear D😩🫰🫰🫰

Marceline2174

​She's ready to enjoy the banquet🔥🔥🔥

Marceline2174

​Thank you so much for enjoying it. Even though it's NSFW, I'm working on it very carefully so as not to ruin the original characterization of the two. Please look forward to the rest of it❤️🩷🤍🙏🙏

Marceline2174

​Thank you so much for enjoying it! I keep rereading the books as I draw to preserve the characters as much as possible. While Rangi's answer is already set, I believe Kyoshi would have definitely asked in return. Please look forward to the rest of it🥺❤️🩷🤍🔥)

Marceline2174

​I think Rangi has the right to show that level of possessiveness... she would have definitely wanted to ask if she was Kyoshi's first kiss😩🔥🔥🔥

Marceline2174

​Thank you so much for enjoying it! Please bear with me and look forward to the rest of it🫡❤️🩷🤍

Zhenlin

100% true 💕 I just love them so much, every time you draw them is so beautiful 🥺🥺 there are no characters in any media I love more

Marceline2174

​Thank you so much for enjoying it! I'm also grateful that you noticed the small details. I'm trying my best to make sure the original character traits of the two aren't lost as the story progresses. Please look forward to the rest of the comic🙇‍♀️❤️🩷🤍

Marceline2174

Thank you so much, Erika🙇‍♀️❤️🩷🤍

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Haha I’m glad we seem to be very aligned with the analysis of their characters. I think it’s great you’re absorbing and giving so much thought about the details, especially what’s written between the lines. I enjoy reading your thoughts and seeing them be translated into your art. I see Rangi as someone who has been consistent all her life—she’s very disciplined, in control. She wears a mask very well. Her love for Kyoshi speaks volumes when she’s bending her own rules and beliefs for her, like you said about her honor. She’s stiff but Kyoshi makes her bendy.😆 “While she might not be possessive, if she hears a question like that from Rangi, a new sense of possessiveness will naturally arise.” This stood out to me and I completely agree. We see evidence that Kyoshi is capable of being jealous when it comes to Rangi. Even if she didn’t do anything about it, it clearly bothered her a lot. A part of me would like to see her act on it just so Rangi has a “oh, she’s jealous” moment and be all smug. I am as shameless as they are.😔 Take your time and thank you for working so hard!🫶

helenx

Finally got around to see this and I’m speechless.

Alex Mamberti

Don't keep us waiting and I gotta say that Rangi is all tough but she really is a romantic. Seeing how she worships Kyoshi's body like that.

Marceline2174

Pages 5 and 6 will be uploaded by this weekend at the latest, so please stay tuned! 😉