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ImperatorsLicht

Aaaaaa This is so cute. They are so sweet together! Hehe, Rangi being like 'Lie down and keep still'... like she needs to concentrate because she IS inexperienced Two sweethearts in bed together 🫠🫠 Also its cool how you captured Kyoshis height in your Art. She long And i love in Page 8 their hands are always touching 🥰🥰🥰 And i always say this but i LOVE all the little Details in your art. Like Kyoshis freckles, the subtle lines you draw to accentuate and bring out Rangis muscles, the sweat, their scars, the way you draw hair, how it cascades and falls naturally instead of just looking like a solid object. Even the movement lines, and the little lines you draw to show the pleasures of the flesh in art. Its hard to point them out with words but they are there 🥰🥰😍

Nouv

More please 🥵🥵🥵🥵

Zhenlin

Oh my freaking goodness, my heart 💚❤️💚❤️ you have their dynamic so perfect, I swear. The moments here are so dang beautiful and natural, I love this so much

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2026-09-07 08:00 Aww they are so sweet!! This is so wholesome 💕
2025-09-17 15:32

Karmah Stronghold

Omg Kyoshi! She's doing her best! Don't laugh 😆

Katla

I don't care anymore, I'll open these updates in public!!🤩🤩🥵 Fantastic!!

P4r4_Shoot

Aaaw so hot, and the last panel is so sweet with Rangi's frustrated face <3 love it.

Robin

Cómo pueden ser tan adorables. Además, tiene que ser genial cuando Kyoshi se ponga arriba, porque me imagino a Rangi agobiada por perder el control

Airbuilder7

Rangi's "Are you for real right now??" expression as she's jaw-deep on Kyoshi 😂❤️

lacy

Years get added to my life w each panel 😭🩷

SeoTheOwl

Rangi being like "Am I a joke to you?!" Is both funny and sweet 😂✨

helenx

It means so much to me how they hold hands when Kyoshi always thinks of Rangi as her anchor, like this is so perfect.

Nix

Gosh I love them so much 😭

Sillyfudgemonkeys

I am going FERALLLLLLLL!!! THEYRE SO CUUUUUTE!!! 😭😭😭💖💖💖😳😳😳

DayanaB2INN

I have mix feelings about this hahahaha It's sexy 🫦 and funny 🤭 at the same time, I love it 💕 Thanks Marceline, you're a genius! ☺️

Bri_The_Tree_Woods

AGHHHHHHHHHHHH- IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND SO MUCH BETTER THEN I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE- AGHHHHH❤️

inquisitor

SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!! thx for the amazing rangi and kyoshi art i love them!! :3

SIN

KYOSHI WH-WHAT YOU MEAN IT TICKLES?? A SEI-NAKA IS

D

*Hands Rangi a band-aid for her pride* The progression feels very believable for their first time, very them. The fumbling and reactions feel genuine and true to character. I think you’re doing really great both illustrating and telling the story of them navigating their first sexy time. It’s realistic for it to not *always* be sexy. The eagerness to take control, to please the other— it’s all very endearing (and romantic and hotttt 🥵). And again, your choice of hand placement is always so…perfect. I see Rangi as the type who would only see any blunders as a challenge to do better. Rangi-ah, while you learn and practice on perfecting your techniques, don’t forget to have fun. :) Her expression is so serious it’s cute.

D

Hmm it is just me or is Patreon being weird and cutting off comments on mobile? 😕

Matoboo

UGH 😩 I NEED TO READ THE VOOKS

bubblijr

This is so cute, so sweet and so so real😂😂 I absolutely love this

Marceline2174

Those two must've had a messy but adorable 'first time' together. I mean, with Kyoshi being totally clueless and Rangi being all about doing things exactly by the book... it must've been a total train wreck😂

Marceline2174

Reassess please join the group and be one of ussss

Marceline2174

​Oh wow, I'm so happy you noticed it! ​Since Rangi is such a by-the-book person when she doesn't have any experience before, she'd totally try to do their first time based on what she'd diligently studied. It would be just like when she researched Kyoshi's war fans. Plus, when you remember how she talks about her favorite food, she seems to have a habit of talking about things she likes in a roundabout way🥹 ​For her first attempt, she probably just wanted to please Kyoshi by following the steps she'd learned from a book. Because she was trying to follow a script instead of her own instincts, it must have been even more of a mess. Still, she will find a way to enjoy it together with Kyoshi, and the goal is to capture that well in the comic. ​I'm going to do my best to draw their lovely, messy, but adorable first time all the way through🔥🔥! Thanks so much for always grasping what I intend. It's an indescribable feeling of happiness every time the audience reads my intentions😭😭😭❤️💚❤️💚

Marceline2174

​Haha, there's no way they had a smooth and sexy first time🙂‍↕️

Marceline2174

Yay! ​I'm so happy you felt those two emotions! That's exactly what I intended🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

Marceline2174

​Everything they do together is so cute and endearing. Their time together must have been a constant mix of loving each other and playful bickering😭💚❤️💚❤️

Marceline2174

​It's heartbreaking to think about how lovely when Kyoshi and Rangi are together, and how Kyoshi changed in her later avatarhood. I also wonder if Kyoshi would have become so cold if Rangi had been able to stay with her all along. After all, Rangi was the only person who never changed and stayed by her side, even as everything else around Kyoshi did🥺

Marceline2174

​Kyoshi's turn is coming. This comic is going to be quite long, so please wait and see how well she does when it's her turn😏💚

Marceline2174

Thank you 🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️💚❤️💚❤️💚❤️

Marceline2174

​I see it as my mission to finish this comic without losing their core character traits. My main goal is to maintain their lovable and quirky nature! I'm really happy that you like it🥹💚❤️💚❤️💚❤️

Zhenlin

I absolutely love it! And you are acing your mission so far, I can’t wait to see the rest. They really are beyond the most special and important characters in my world, so it means a lot to see how well you keep them true to themselves ❤️💚❤️💚

Nix

YES

Marceline2174

​I'm so happy that you're enjoying it! More than anything, it's so amazing and makes me happy that you're able to pinpoint Kyoshi and Rangi's character traits so accurately. The fact that you're picking up on exactly what I intended, even if you haven't read the books (I apologize if I'm wrong!), is truly incredible and something I'm so grateful for. It's so much fun that you're noticing even the smallest details! Your comments are always a source of motivation for me😊💚❤️💚❤️💚❤️

Marceline2174

​And as you probably know by now, Rangi's complete lack of experience was hinted at from the moment she let her hair down right before...this act😂

helenx

no but i don’t wanna think about that because i will CRY

Robin

Me encanta todo. Tú sigue entonces que vas genial 😏

Filo D'Oro

It's so cute🤣 please go on🤣❤️❤️

Alex Mamberti

Kyoshi being completely clueless on how to initiate being too eager while with Rangi taking the reins instead and taking her sweet time with the avatar it's just too sweet and funny, especially the look on the firebender's face, a very romantic first time. 😂 ❤️

Pinckz Streaming

I love the ticklish part! The best love making I've had, usually has a bit of laughter. 🥺