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ShadowOfSilent

Kyoshi is so BOOBwoman ❤️ but i can understand her

Karmah Stronghold

Awwww Rangi! My heart! My little gay heart! 💕

ImperatorsLicht

Aaaaaa amazing Marceline. Once again you hit all the right spots. 🥰😍😍😍 When she says 'you silly', and does that little kiss... 🫠🫠🫠 And the classic Strand of saliva.. mmm my favourite 🥰🥰

Alex Lee-El

Oh, Rangi! Studying so she can be perfect for her love is so cute. The first-time nerves are so real. Gotta love a woman as kind and patient as Kyoshi🙂‍↕️

Nix

Them just them 😭♥️

Zhenlin

Rangi would absolutely study for this 🥺🥺🥺 and then she’s 100% ace the test, Kyoshi’s in for it now 💚❤️💚❤️💚❤️💚❤️ always bringing us the best

Alex Mamberti

Well done Marceline you made my heart warm and fuzzy. A clear view of what true love really is about and that Rangi wanted to make sure their first time is perfect ❤️❤️❤️

DayanaB2INN

Holy mother of Yuri! I never thought that the one who initially wanted to do it was Kyoshi, in my mind Rangi was the one that wanted to do naughty stuff with Kyoshi. 😳😳😳 I apologize for thinking that the little flame wanted to cause a fire. 😓 Marceline... Wow! You keep surprising me everytime you drop a part of this comic series, that part of the story is so interesting, Rangi was trying learn and be prepared to please kyoshi, that's freaking cuuuutteee, I was melting on my seat while reading it, and not just for the nsfw, that's a nice touch to add, that kind of details just show's how much you love the couple, thanks for your art! 💕💕💕

Paul Robinson

Kyoshi with the boob grab 😏 it makes sense that Rangi would be slower, despite her fiery nature. She’s focused and devoted.

arcely mpl

yo sabía que kyoshi era una desesperada urgidita

Marceline2174

Exactly. I’ve always thought that Kyoshi would be much more honest and straightforward about her desires compared to Rangi. It seems like Kyoshi becomes exceptionally soft and gentle specifically when she is with Rangi. ​Since becoming the Avatar, Kyoshi has grown quite sensitive and sharp, but because she is always so tender toward Rangi, it feels like Rangi might actually be a bit slow to notice those...you know needs? While Rangi is the one who leads the overall relationship, Kyoshi is likely the one a step ahead when it comes to physical intimacy😔🔥🔥🔥

Marceline2174

Rangi is a soldier who lives by a code, so I think her internal manual for romance is much more cautious and traditional than Kyoshi’s learn-by- doing approach😂

Marceline2174

Rangi definitely has a hot-headed and fiery personality, but she maintains very clear boundaries when it comes to relationships. While she is a total romantic at heart, she seems slower to progress when it comes to intimacy. ​After all, Kyoshi was the one who initiated their first kiss, and Rangi often shows a shy side—blushing from her cheeks to her ears🥹—whenever she’s facing Kyoshi. And because Rangi is so thoughtful and cautious, she likely had a much more patient, leisurely timeline in mind for their first night together(poor Kyoshi), especially compared to Kyoshi, who tends to have a lets-do-this attitude once she decides on something.

Marceline2174

Thank youuu! I felt the need to emphasize the fact that they are both ADULTS in this story. I’ve always viewed Kyoshi as someone who is much more honest about her own desires and doesn't worry about you know, saving face in that regard. ​Compared to Rangi, who tends to overthink things like this, I believe it’s much more likely that Kyoshi was the one who first pulled them toward this step. It’s honestly such a joy to draw these two silly gays🥹❤️❤️💚💚

Marceline2174

This is a scene I’m adding later, but Rangi must’ve been so desperate that she threw her pride out the window and went to Kirima for help... Just imagine the look on that young daofei's face when she hears about it. 'Oh, Rangi, how shameful can you get?

Zhenlin

Oh my GOD YES 😍 I am begging for this so hard 😭😭😭😍😍

Marceline2174

She's definitely the boobwoman for sure🔥🔥🔥

Marceline2174

Give this poor baby dyke the strength to keep her girl happy😂

Marceline2174

Haha The bumbling, trial-and-error journey of these young gays navigating their first time continues❤️💚❤️💚❤️💚

Marceline2174

Rooting for Rangi as she faces this life-or-death task from her girl! Give her the strength to get through the gut-wrenching stress and total inner chaos leading up to her first time😂

ginger

been waiting all day to read these pages!! i adore the hand holding sm 😭😭

Alex Mamberti

You know I can't help but think that this is a flashback on how it all started and that the last page is in the present. 🥹

DayanaB2INN

You seem to deeply understand each one of their personalities, I like that ☺️ I'm reading the shadow of Kyoshi and it's just such a bliss to have an image of reference to each of the emblematic scenes on the book. Thanks you 💕

Djdarkness

This is so cute! 🥰🥰🥰

toffeefart

did you rearrange the order of the pages?

D

Flashback definitely satisfies some curiosities! It’s rare for Rangi to be visibly caught off guard and to unsure/nervous. The whole interaction and conversation reflects their personalities well, and in the end both are always so considerate of each other. Feels like Rangi is more nervous about doing well and the technical bits than the actual deed itself. Relax girl, you’ll be just fine. It’s the look that Kyoshi gives Rangi in p16 panel 3 –full of kindness and patience. That’s the type of shit that gets me.🥺 I like how you handled the transition from “Kyoshi…I want to be enough for you…” to the following scene where Kyoshi is getting her mind blown. She’s close…perhaps? Thanks for continuously giving us QUALITY work. Have I ever told you that you’re amazing? Yeah? Well too bad, I’m telling you again. 😂

Mar

Rangi looking up at Kyoshi while going down on her has to be one of the most beautifully drawn things i’ve ever seen! Amazing as always.

Marceline2174

Oh, is something wrong? It seems okay from my side. Please let me know if you have any issues

Marceline2174

Hand holding while doing things like this is so cute and lovely🥹

Marceline2174

It might be a Sei’naka thing...? both Hei-Ran and Rangi have this obsession with being perfect. Unlike Kyoshi, who’s more about just being in the moment, I think Rangi was pretty desperate😩. I imagine her being totally focused on just you know, performing well enough to satisfy her love🥹 Of course, I hope Kyoshi’s influence eventually gets her to a point where she can just let go and instinctively enjoy it☺️ As always, thanks so much for the love and for enjoying my work🥹💚❤️💚❤️

arcely mpl

este si fue muyyyy bueno

luz

ughhh your knowledge of the characters is so so good!!! i'm really glad we can see them through your lenses. of course kyoshi would be THIRSTY and of course rangi would take her time and do her best to be perfect for her kyoshi!!!! i love this

Jasel

They are so cute 🥺

Khoda

It must be an interesting comic page XD Rangi studying those books and taking notes hahahaha