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Edit 5/31 - added some alternate hairstyles. In theory the same hairstyle, done up and loose.

Meet McKenzie, Miyuki's gym rival, and a shiny new character!

McKenzie thinks she's better than everyone else, which is a problem, because Miyuki happens to know she is in fact better than everyone else, and so they don't like one another. McKenzie works for a high priced gym that aims for a certain degree of elitism, while Miyuki's gym is a bit more egalitarian (although let's be honest, personal trainers are for people with money, there's no way around that). So she's a bit snooty, and a bit preppy - Miyuki's rather eccentric life doesn't impress her really, and she doesn't think ninjas are real.

Since she's a civilian, Miyuki's not allowed to use violence on her, so the two of them   are mostly just jerks to one another. They also try to embarrass one another by tricking each other into public nudity (or just catching the other when it's happening) - they both have problems staying in possession of their clothes, so this is a strangely common occurrence.

Still not 100% on the hair, I kind of want her to be a bit more girlie, so maybe long hair is the play here. Also have not given her a last name yet.

"Gymnotocracy" is not actually a word, although a Gymnosocracy would be a system of government based on nudity.

Enjoy,

-D

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Doc Baghead

You should give her Chun-Li/Sailor Moon style hair buns if you want her to have a “girlie” hairstyle while still fitting her personality… because upper class gym white gym ladies definitely think they can wear that hair because it’s “sporty” and don’t see a problem with it but Miyuki would see it and be all like “really?!”

Lygot

For haughty rich girl, Id definitely say go for long flowing hair, styled in a way that definitely takes way too long to do every morning

WillRigby

I wonder if she has her own goth girl?

Jarogo

*groan* Okay, sorry, I gotta real talk here. Do not want. Miyuki always struck me as mischievous with her sexual harassment, but in a spread-the-sexy oh-don't-worry-I'll-get-naked-too sort of way. Always aimed at her friends, and never really especially mean-spirited. And, if I'm going to be entirely honest, Lygot's storyline is a little mean-spirited for my tastes, and I was getting sick of it dominating so many polls and kinda taking over the Patreon. Maybe once in a while, but almost every time? Miyuki getting her own Stacey-esque rival was not exactly something I was clamoring for. It just seems like you trying to do MORE of the storyline I've already tired of, just with Miyuki getting to be the main character again... while doing things that just don't seem very Miyuki-ish. *sigh* Maybe I'm taking it too seriously, but I'm giving my thoughts. I'm really not into the stripping-out-of-spite angle.

Jaxton Dragoon

I personally like the short hair. If she's a serious trainer it seems more reasonable. Seeing her and Miyuki having a playful rivalry, like rival gyms could reasonably have could be funny.