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The oldest draft posted for some reason. The. Chapter has been updated

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Sunniest Day

After reading both I can't find any glaring change ? Am I genuinely blind ?

Broker

Lots of little details and phrasing I fixed during editing to make it shine.

Sunniest Day

Oh, probably why I did not find anything, I was trying to find some changes to the story itself in the chapter, my bad. Thanks for the chapter as always !