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PAGE INSIGHT

 I wrote this story way before I started working on characters and mapping out the panels. What I find odd is that when I finally get to a page, I no longer like what was originally written for some reason. So, I haven't cleared it with him yet, but I have an editor who has been a huge help. 

In this panel, originally, Arn was to crack a joke to lighten the mood. Later, if felt out of character for him to do so. 

The elimination of just a single line of dialogue affected so much more in just this single page.

I will add more insights from here on out if you find this even a little interesting.

Oh, the original last dialogue by Arn was, "There's no need of it. Now, unlike you, my belly is empty, and I'm famished."