Question for my Seclusion Readers (Patreon)

Hey! So, I’ve recently had a few people mention that they’re having a hard time getting into Seclusion or end up dropping it entirely after the first few chapters. Because of that, I wanted to ask about your experience with the beginning—specifically up to Chapter 4.

Do you think those early chapters + prologue need some adjustment or refining? I’d really love to hear your honest thoughts—especially when the story started to click for you.

Any feedback would be super appreciated. It would help me a lot in figuring out how to make the opening stronger and more engaging for new readers!