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The adventures of Dave, Bucky and their friends will continue in the next chapter! 


So folks, how did this first chapter of JFT seem to you? what are your views on the style, the choice of dialogue and the story? do you have any suggestions on this? 

Comment and write me to let me know your ideas about it! 


In the meantime, I'll take 3/4 weeks off to finish the script for the next chapter, but also to complete a couple of commissions and resume live on Picarto.


But I really want to thank very much all my Patreons who have allowed me to carry out this project, without your support I would never have made it! So thanks again! ❤️❤️❤️

Comments

Félix Rêverie

The story is intriguing and interested for more. But also very relatable.

Black Lion21

Thanks for your feedback! yes, I tried to use a simple story. by "relatable" you mean that it is taken for granted? easily guessed? Would you rather it had more twists?

Félix Rêverie

Relatable, as in, we feel for the characters in the story and we see that it could happen in real life. It's a good thing.

Black Lion21

oh ok! cool! and yes, it was my intention that it was close to real life. thank you again <3