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Volume Summaries... Interest Poll

  • A summary of the next volume would be great! 1
  • No, don't spoil it! 7
  • 2017-05-01
  • 8 votes
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For a few weeks I have been wrestling with the idea of sharing chapter summaries for all of Volume 3 with you guys. Obviously, there would be some MAJOR spoilers in there, and this would be for the $10+ tiers if I did this, but would this be something you'd be interested in?   

As an example, here is the summary for Vol. 2, ch 10 I made back when I was finishing Vol. 1.

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Chapter 11. Disposable Teens

Keep this short. SHORT. Trim where necessary. 14-16 pages would be AWESOME.

- Different from the novel. Starts out with Ora in lunch room, looking at all her peers, sitting all alone. She keeps asking herself where she went wrong, and she flashes back to earlier in class where her classmates are laughing at her after she introduces herself. She goes to sit down when a girl trips her, exposing her cute bunny undies. Teacher gets onto her for disrupting class and being obscene. She is mortified, flashes back to present and decides she is going to wear tights from now on. She is about to cry when Arma sits down. Unlike in novel, Arma sits down, asks if she's being treated okay, sees Ora is upset, and Arma immediately cracks her knuckles and asks if someone is picking on her. Ora fakes a smile and tells Arma she's just got a stomach ache. Arma asks if she can make it through the rest of the day and Ora says she'll try.

- Move girls scene here, where Kim etc come and hit on Arma. Ora is kinda surprised and blushes at how they treat Arma, and Arma says she thinks the people are nice but kinda weird. The teachers call her sir and girls keep giggling when she walks by. Ora suggests Arma has the boy's uniform.

- Over the intercom, a voice says "Arma King, Arma King, report to the vice principal's office" and Arma curses her luck. She tells Ora she'll see her after school, and Ora is sad that Arma is leaving her alone.

- Move Sam as VP scene here. He tells her about her previous record and she is pissed...

- Arma goes home, and Lamia doesn't want to see her wiener scene moves here.

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I might shorten any summaries I post here, but this is the sort of thing I do for myself when collecting the material for a graphic novel format. In doing this, it helps me guage how many chapters per book I'll have, helps me hit the major beats, and I can catch unnecessary elements. For example, I originally had an extra chapter called Witchy Woman that I ended up cutting because it would have been too much "filler" (and this vol had quite a bit of scenes that were character building but not vital to the plot).

Anyway, too much spoilery? What do you guys think?

Comments

NiWo21k

Personaly i think after that cliffhanger, i am not so sure, i think it would be better to not have a summery or something what could spoil the story. But thats just my opinion (and if the majority would like to read it, i still can ignore it) ;-)

cnhsgqtwec

...you can vote for both... e_e I almost want to do that just because I like contradicting myself... I would like spoilers also, so... Decisions, decisions.

ShadowTiger

I personally just skim the updates for background/behind the scenes info, I prefer to binge read the final volume without spoilers. As long as its properly marked with big bold spoiler warning I don't care either way.