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Half Sisters - Episode 57 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-10-01 03:58:13
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2025-03-25 00:14:44
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2026-06
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Nikki threw a stone - now come the ripples.

Phew! It's a long one at 33 pages. 😊

Really can't wait to hear your thoughts on the episode!

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Omagathief

Is there going to be a PDF file for these pages?

Omagathief

Phew 😮‍💨, nice timing Zach. You might have just stopped your assh*le of a father from being gutted in his own driveway

Tim

While this episode left Nikki in far worse circumstances vis-a-vis Hutchinson, it appears just the opposite for her and Zach... and he now knows how she truly feels about him. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops going forward (perhaps to Armando's chagrin).

Maggie Heels

Start reading just now ❣️❣️❣️

Jade Diaz

God Zach is so so beautiful and hot. If Nikki is unable to kiss him, I'll be very happy to substitute.

Maggie Heels

Jesus what a cliffhanger ❣️❣️❣️Janice needs to comeback ASAP she'll be safer close to Zach and not alone for sure... and I would be really surprised if she hasn't gps tracker installed under her skin... that wasn't a smart idea Nikki...

Gemma

Wow! where to start. Great images and beautifully illustrated action angles and perspectives on Nikki in this episode. Very realistic, mmm even ‘Hitchcock like’ views at times. Again you don’t let our hearts stop beating as we (the readers) go from one cliff hanger to the next. It is hard to know how Nikki, and Zach get out of this. Loved seeing the developing empathy, thoughtfulness and compassion in Nikki. It is also interesting to note her ongoing female voice throughout this episode. I wonder if she is aware of it? In relation to her physical changes Hutchinson seems to love to remind her of her feminine form, always referring to her in female pronouns and other patranising language whenever he refers to her. The pleasure he took in dismissing her attempt to ‘punch him out’ in her new dainty form highlighting the enormity of the loss of her strength. Whilst others may disagree, the way Nikki spoke about Zach sounded very passionate. Again this teasingly opens up the debate on the future direction and developing nature of her relationship with Zach. Thanks again Emory. Please make the next chapter less hectic, so we can breathe a sigh of relief, sit back and enjoy Nikki’s beauty.

Andre

That would have been better.

Andreas

Will there be a story about what horrible think janice had to endure before? Im kind of curious

Richard Head

Nikki would make for a great horror movie main girl. And that knife is a slasher weapon if I've ever seen one. She takes down the antagonist temporarily to free a friend, then has a final stand-off. She struggles and is nearly taken down herself but then her love interest swoops in and they defeat the villain together. Well, that part won't play out exactly like that, but hopefully they get their happy-ever-after eventually.

Omagathief

Maybe in the short run but it would have soon come back to bite them in the arse with a vengeance eventually

Bobbie

Stunning story and images. ❤

SingularCurve

Another great cliff hanger in this delightful story! Zach may or may not man up enough to cause his father to realize father has failed and wont get a second chance. Maybe Zach's father needs to be sent to Clinic 12 to be turned into a toy?

Thomas Tolliver

Stabby stab stab... oh, right, the story. Sorry, I wasn't fantasizing about giving this creepy mofo what he deserves.

Harley Allen

So many new characters throughout all the different parts of this story, it’s great! So many peoples lives changed forever! I wish we could see them having to be changed and used though… just like Angela!

Helena Grace

It's interesting because we know from when we last saw Sandy, it was two weeks later than this is. So, as much as I would love for Hutchinson to get stabbed a dozen times. Nikki would revert to Nick if he was out of the picture. But a physical struggle around a knife has potential to go badly. Poor Nikki and her very bad 24 hours. It was literally yesterday when she fell into Zach's arms from the stairs. I hope Janice makes it out, a naked woman in a truck is going to attract attention and we already know the local cops are in Hutchinson's pocket. If only there was a safe place locally for Janice to go. She was wealthy before, maybe some of her old holdings are still around and nearby.

Joe

I wonder how loose nikkis cage is rn 🤔

Helena Grace

How off the deep end will Hutchinson go if Zach even gets a scratch here from that knife?

Richard Head

I can see Janice coming back on her own as she knows she can be tracked, so maybe begging forgiveness and to spare Nikki is the way to go. And seeing just how much of a man his son has become since meeting Nikki is sure to leave a positive impression on Mr. Hutchinson. He'll still probably put the boot down on her to make her act like the girl he wants her to be, though even she is coming around to thinking that would be bearable.

frogger

You can only poke the bear so many times ... Hutch might actually get the stick this time ... deserved.

Ella Cherry

Thrilling! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

jake112k

I am rooting for Nikki to break away from these horrible people, this is not his nature.

ckarya

First of all, congratulations, Emory, on a great job, both as a writer and as an artist. These last two chapters have it all: drama, action, mystery, intrigue, horror and even humor, my hat is off to you! Very interesting dialogue between Nikki and Hutchinson, quite revealing about Hutchinson's plans and personality, and how far he is willing to go for his 'legacy'... and his depravities... And also very interesting is the conversation between Nikki and Jackson/Janice, with Zach listening in on the phone... In it we see how Nikki has already realized that the Nick his father molded into a 'man' is not the Nick he wanted to be, that the real Nick was the boy Nick, that he was happier being the boy Nick than the man Nick. But we also see how some of the traits of the man Nick have taken root (for the better) in Nikki, his competitiveness, his assertiveness, these are traits that he is comfortable with and that I think he will find useful in his 'new life'. All of this in the future, and when Nick finally understands that there is no turning back from being Nikki, will help her to stop being a 'victim' and give her tools to live her new life and even enjoy it. As for the Zach/Nikki theme, not everything in life is about crushes between the characters, there is also true friendship and more so in the circumstances these two find themselves in. Both are forced to live a life they don't want. People, and especially young people, tend to fight and rebel the more we are forced to do something against our wishes. And I think that is exactly the case with Zach and Nikki. Because as far as we know Nick has never been attracted to men and Zach has never been attracted to women and 'thanks' to Dr Mason's hormones Nick is becoming more and more 'NIKKI-RA' and Zach is becoming more and more 'ZACH-MAN' so I understand that the physical attraction between them is zero tending to zero. So I understand that infatuation is impossible if physical attraction and emotional attraction go in opposite directions.

Robertlouis

Apologies for joining the conversation so late, but I’ve had to deal with a lot of medical issues recently and have just started to catch up with your recent submissions, Emory, and there’s a lot to take in. Firstly, as with other recent episodes of Half Sisters, the linear narrative in the harsh Texas sun and landscape lends the setting a strong western movie feel. It’s quite elemental in that respect. All that’s missing is the black hat for Hutchinson! There’s some very telling dialogue too, as Nikki starts to confess and reveal in ways that she never has before of how she’s behaved in the past. Her respect and admiration for Zach is such that it’s rubbing off on her to the extent that she’s now, for the first time, actively putting herself at risk in order to help someone else. The frightened girl who let Jill sacrifice her balls in her stead is now making sacrifices to help someone else, Janice. She still really needs to sort out her names and pronouns though! Oh, and everyone is making assumptions about Armando. Let’s wait and see. And Zach physically tackling his father is huge - he’s probably stronger, but how far will he go if he is threatening to kill Janice and harm Nikki? Very interesting. Yet another tantalising cliffhanger. Brilliant stuff, ma’am.

Emory Ahlberg

Yes, killing Hutchinson would have been very satisfying - but ultimately would've put both Zach and Nikki in even worse danger, either from Second Dawn or law enforcement... or both!

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Tim! I've been itching to explore their relationship even more. Nikki's speech about Zach was a pivotal moment for her character - it's the first time she's really allowed herself to be vulnerable and admit her changing feelings to about Zach... and about herself! I'm honestly fascinated by the idea of these two characters finding common ground in their shared trauma and oppression. They're both victims of Hutchinson's manipulations, albeit in very different ways. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Maggie! I think Nikki's decision to help Janice escape comes from a good place, but you're right - it might not have been the smartest move. I wanted to show how Nikki's impulsiveness, which served her well as a quarterback, can sometimes backfire in this new, and definitely more complex situation!

Tim

So let me see if I understand – Zach is pumped full of hormones, drastically changing the shape of his body. His life is manipulated and controlled as if he were a puppet. And he is forced to become someone he was never meant to be. Nikki on the other hand is pumped full of hormones, drastically changing the shape of her body. Her life is manipulated and controlled as if she were a puppet. And she is forced to become someone she was... I get it now, Emory – they're both victims but in very different ways.

Emory Ahlberg

LOL - I suppose by "different" I meant the roles he wants them to play! 😉

Emory Ahlberg

"Unable" or "unwilling?" 😉But, yeah, Zach is a pretty one - and a good personality to boot!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Gemma! I think it's obvious that Nick / Nikki, who was honestly kind of a jerk before all this, is starting to rediscover his better nature through this ordeal. As for Zach and Nikki's relationship... man, that's complicated. I think Nikki is starting to see Zach in a new light, but there's still so much baggage there. Their relationship is definitely going to continue to evolve!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Josh! Hopefully you find the conclusion of this "mini trilogy" (that's how I think of each of the three-episode groupings) to be satisfying! 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Richard! You're totally right. Nikki's got that final girl energy - tough, resourceful, and very lucky! "Eventually" is the key hear. Nikki and Zach are in for a long journey!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you very much, Bobbie! I'm really happy with how the panels came out.

Emory Ahlberg

Interesting idea, Singular! We already know from what happened to Kendra that Xu is more than happy to do that under extreme circumstances...

Emory Ahlberg

🤣 You're definitely channeling Nikki there, Thomas! I don't think how close Hutchinson realizes he came to getting stabbed. Once he threatened Mom, it seemed like Nikki's qualms went out the window!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Hel! I'm so interested by how Nikki's experiences are shaping her character. The physical struggle with Hutchinson is at least partly about Nikki confronting the reality of her changed body and the power dynamics at play. Even in moments of defiance, she's constantly reminded of her change. And, yeah, Janice's escape is definitely precarious. Some might even say it's impossible for her to escape...!

Emory Ahlberg

Believe it or not, it has only been about a day since she was able to (briefly) take it off. She's had a really rough 48 hours!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Richard! I love where your head's at with Janice! Her returning voluntarily would really hammer home the psychological impact of what Hutchinson has done to her. I'm fascinated by the dynamic between Hutchinson and Zach. In my mind, Hutchinson's whole worldview is built on this twisted idea of masculinity. But, with Zach, he's created an amazing guy...just not in the way he intended.

Emory Ahlberg

Hopefully SEVERAL sticks - and maybe another rock for good measure. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Ella!!! I can't wait for you to read it!

Emory Ahlberg

Nikki is trapped for now - but hopefully not forever!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, CK! I'm glad you enjoyed these chapters! Writing Hutchinson's character is always a challenge because I want to show his twisted logic without making him cartoonishly evil. He genuinely believes he's doing what's best (mostly for himself), which makes him all the more dangerous. Nikki's evolving sense of self is something I'm really excited to explore further. I've always seen her arc as less about gender (although obviously that's a big part of what has happened) and more about authenticity. The Nick that everyone saw - the hyper-masculine football star - was a mask he wore to fit in and please his father. Now, stripped of that mask, Nikki is rediscovering parts of herself that she buried long ago. The relationship between Zach and Nikki is so crucial. They're both trapped in impossible situations. How could they not develop a strong connection? Whether anything else will come of it remains to be seen, but there are certainly obstacles to overcome!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you! I hope you're feeling better, Robert! 💕 I'm glad you picked up on the western vibe! In some ways, Nikki is like a classic western hero - caught between two worlds, trying to navigate a moral landscape that's constantly shifting beneath her feet. Although, I suppose most western heroes don't have a butt as nice as hers! 😂 Nikki's growth is something I'm really excited about. I wanted to show how adversity can bring out hidden depths in people. Nikki's starting to rediscover parts of herself she'd buried under years of toxic masculinity and peer pressure. Slowly - very slowly - she's excavating her true self from under all that baggage. I love how Jill inspired her to save someone else. I definitely don't believe the Nikki we first met on the island would do that considering the risks. As for Armando... well, we'll meet him eventually! Hehe.

Jade Diaz

She **can** kiss him and I hope she has an epiphany which she’ll spend the next 10 episodes denying lol

Jade Diaz

As far as a nice butt goes, you need to see some Henry Fonda westerns…

stacy C

Damn you and your cliffhangers Em haha ;-) x

Robertlouis

I loved when he played brilliantly against type in Once Upon a Time in the West.

SingularCurve

If it tickles you even for a "what if...?" take it and run with it. I Muse it to you.

Bartoon

Ok slasher horror vibes aside, Nikki's abs and bust look absolutely fire in pages 32,33

Bartoon

Very well done!!

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, DJ! Honestly, those would be right at home in most slasher movies, too! LOL

Winter Naomi Vera .

I think Hutchinson & Davis would make a perfect married couple.