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Jill returns to where her journey began, but this time, she's on the outside looking in...

This was another incredibly fun chapter. I love how beautiful Jill looks, especially in comparison to the stark surroundings.

As always, I can't wait to read your thoughts! 💖

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Jessica Thence

I really liked this one! I eagerly anticipate the next!

Tiki D

Jill has really "moved on" from Mason or hasn't she?

Tiki D

I just hope Conner doesn't damaged Jill's gorgeous looks.

Tiki D

Davis is really enjoying Jill's dilemma with Conner.

Tiki D

Jill already knows that what it's like down here since her beginning.

Tiki D

Conner needs to realize that Xu has all the cards.

Tiki D

I can't wait to Conner's full transformation both body and mind.

Pelicanboss

Poor Jill, being put in this situation. It's amazing that after everything she's been through she thinks of others before herself. Jill stopped being Jack a long time ago. And no, I don't think Connor will harm her. Besides there are cameras everywhere watching. Davis likes to mess with Jill every chance he has and it gives him a kick to see Jill in a tough spot.

Alyson Greaves

Love Jill calling them out on the carefully-applied grime in the Silent Hill basement *and* setting up the way she instinctively believes most of the men brought here are kind of like her ("these theatrics weren't necessary") and won't, e.g. try to strangle their sisters-in-law. "Theatrics is one of our primary tools" — kid Davis always playing the villain in the school play and being *way* too good at it. He was absolutely the one who'd tuck ketchup bottles under his arms to spray all the parents in the audience with 'blood' for his death scene. Jill, finally getting a clear head about Mason after all these years. Or is she still playing Davis? She knows he's put everything on the line to try to rescue her, after all. (And if she is moving on, how much will that attitude survive seeing him again in the flesh? Aah, I'm excited!) It's great that she finally sees everything as it really is — Mason, Davis, the fake-ass ruined hospital basement, all the manipulation — only after it's too late for her. "So is cheating on your wife with women who are entirely in your power," I feel like Davis gets a kick out of casting Second Dawn in a noble lighht around Jill. What's that, Jill? You think we should have let him go, so he can ruin more lives? YOU were the one who didn't want to kill him... Countdown to Holly getting Jill a pink taser. Maybe two, so she can dual-wield like Lara Croft. The sinking feeling I had seeing Jill insist that she can just be kind, she can go in unarmed, that Connor will respond to reason... that she can just *explain*. Connor. Still so hateable! Exactly the right kind of person to confront Jill with, tbh. *This* is what men can be like, if they're let loose without consequences. Why, maybe you should contrast the polite conversation you just had with Davis against the outright violence you're facing from Connor...? Also, no-one ever lets Jill explain about the spray! First Xu, now Connor! Let her talk about the spray! 😋 lol "I see Jack" no you don't mate, you're just doing that cis guy thing of trying WAY too hard to see the man in the woman standing in front of you. "You weren't a particularly good man, either." "This is a chance for you to start healing." YES. Love Pilled Jill. Sell Second Dawn! ...And now I'm just incredibly anxious. Jill!

France Day

Pretty Jill, doesn't seem to judge the situation, as she infiltrates her new life. With Conner and soon Connie, the road will not be easy. Despite her naivety, she's a fabulous go-getter and the road seems set for a saga full of twists and turns. How Jill will manage to combine the events that will arise from the Jill/Connie dialectic. Superb EA - Thanks.

Phil G1

Outstanding idea to have Jill return in this capacity. Maybe Nikki needs a refresher visit to accept her fate and complete the process of forced transition where she has no choice but to accept what she is.

Emily

Jill suddenly gives *her a powerful Titty twister. And the unexpected pain causes *her to let go of Jill. Coughing Jill knees him hard in what little remaining nuts *she has. Conner falls to the floor in pain more from the double pain and weakness from refusing to eat. Jill coughing apologizing tries to prevent what happens next but is too late

Emily

I liked how she said "that won't set the right tone with him" its says so much about how she is hoping to motivate/ even manipulate him into doing what she wants him to do. of course for good intentions

Emily

I wonder if the taser really would have worked? or was Davis willing to bring a live weapon to in the same room as Conner. No I think he is a twisted SOB who knew she wouldn't harm Conner and I really hope he is put in the program too

Ella Cherry

I'm very curious about this new plot! And I love to see the beginning of Connor's transformation!

Kirsten Roberts

Great episode and can’t wait for the next one. Love the direction it’s going

Bowie897

So... where can I download the app created by the "eggheads" that Mr. Davis is using on his phone? It seems that it shows the final results of the Platinum Stars feminization process. I am sure I am not the only one who would like to try the app on themselves!

Maggie Heels

OH OMG this is sooo awesome....... I knew this is how it would go, that Jill would try the soft approach and find herself up against a wall "literally" I felt it in my bones.... oh after the first meeting Jill will probably be a bit confused.... but I think she'll get over it.... this first attack on her neck will cause her to quickly get over the family sentiment and move on to the task like a pro :)

Alyson Greaves

This is pretty much her first encounter with a guy who wishes to actively HURT her (unless you define, like, forced fem as harm, which, uh), since all the other times have either been Davis being Davis, or early in her stay when she attacked the electrolysis technician and Mason had to stop her. I find myself wondering if this is going to make it sink in how much different her life will be now even more than the time on the mainland did.

Maggie Heels

Asking Davis for help showed how fragile Jill became... I hope she'll deal with this situation by herself without Davis help. And it'll make her stronger for the future.

ckarya

In this chapter, I'm going to focus mainly on the final bonus, Connie's pin-up. Thank god Mason's elixir doesn't create only plump and curvy women, I already thought this was the case hehehehe.... By now we had 2 out of 2: Josie and Jill. Because I think, Holly, Angela and Janelle were created by "traditional" means (here we also have 2 for 3). The one I'm not sure about is Nikki, who I think is also being treated with Mason's elixir, so that would break my absurd theory... The important thing, I think Connor/Connie is going to be a very beautiful girl! hehehehe. As for the chapter, it's going to be interesting plot development we are presented with, although I think with "D" day (The Departure), so close, there must be less than 14 days left, it has me a bit puzzled, since, except for Em, the rest of us don't know what will come of it..... I love it! I think Emory once said he was projecting 10 phases in the story, so I'm more reassured that there will be good development to unravel the tangle whatever happens on "D" day. (I hope these last 3 phases will be as long as phase 7, or longer...) 😘 Keep it up Emory, I love your talent.

Robertlouis

Davis is more, much more than a blunt instrument. There’s some serious psychology going on here, and it’s another reminder to Jill of her loss of masculinity and strength as well as dependence on others. She’s not going to come to any real harm, just enough to chasten her. As for Connor, he’s also going to be humbled and made aware of how little agency he has. It’s all a question of how long he’s prepared to maintain the fight.

stacy C

Am I right in thinking the pin up is Connor's future self hehe x

Emory Ahlberg

It’s the “progression” that Davis received from the eggheads. 😁

Emory Ahlberg

Oh, that would be so fun, Bowie! Unfortunately, the app is proprietary tech. So, the only way to access it would be to get captured and feminized by Second Dawn. Up for it? 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks for pointing this out, Robert. Davis like to portray himself as a bit of an oaf, but he’s obviously quite effective at his job. If he wasn’t, Mr. Xu wouldn’t keep him around. Pitting Connor against Jill is serving several purposes, as you’ve said. Davis is more clever than he seems!

Emory Ahlberg

🤣 You’ll soon see how close your scenario is to what happens next!

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Phil. So fun to bring Jill back to where it all began. 😄 Nikki is also back where it all began, kinda. Her acceptance will be a slower and more deliberate process—if it happens at all!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, France! Jill is forgetting her own reaction to the changes and is assuming that by “being kind” she can blunt Connor’s fury. Big mistake! Hopefully she won’t pay too high of a price.

Emory Ahlberg

So true, Pelican. Jack was mired in a mix of self-loathing (disguised as self-centeredness) and apathy. By being out through all this, Jill has come to care about herself and therefore has space for kindness for others. We’ll see if you’re right about Davis!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Kirsten! ❤️ Can’t wait to get the new one out to you. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Ella! The beginning of the transformation is always so exciting!

Emory Ahlberg

Interesting thought, H2B! Davis is definitely an ass—so much so that I wonder if he’s even worthy of the program!

Emory Ahlberg

Jill doesn’t want to be a “handler” — but if she has to be, she’s going to try to be the nicest one there is! ❤️

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Alyson! Jill has a lot of naïve ideas of what some men are capable of doing. Her own history of a guy is a little spotty, but only insofar as she wasn't a particularly good boyfriend. It never crossed Jack's mind that most of the women he slept with weren't interested in a relationship with him, either. Jack was also big and masculine enough that he was never a victim of male violence. Therefore, this will be Jill's first real experience with a man wanting to hurt her. It may end up being a devastating experience, depending on what happens. Davis absolutely relishes the role of the "heel" in Xu's operations. He's a masochist, and enjoys drama. Really, I think he's the most loathsome character in the story. Many have said they hope he ends up getting the same treatment as Jill, but I don't think he's worthy of womanhood. LOL - Now I really DO need to get Holly a pink taser. She'd love it. Jill's kindness is still a strength, even if it's now getting used against her. Her true personality is now able to shine, and to show that this is the kind of person she's always been deep inside. Unfortunately, Connor only sees the weak facade she once presented to the world. Poor Jill is still using that spray every morning without realizing her voice has been permanently altered and she doesn't need it anymore. It's possible she has a suspicion, but doesn't want to stop lest it's true and she realizes her old voice is gone forever--just one more permanent change. Is Connor salvageable as a person? One has to wonder if Jill will begin to think Second Dawn's methods MIGHT be acceptable for CERTAIN guys... Which, of course, may be what Davis is hoping for... 😈

Robertlouis

Connor/Connie is going to be stunning.