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I'm sorry this is a little late! This part ended up being more challenging than I expected. 

Again, I don't want to say too much since the plots and characters all beginning to align. We're barreling towards the end of Phase 8! 🤯

I can't wait for your thoughts and comments. They always make me so happy to read. 😊

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Alyson Greaves

Yes, Angela! Know your worth! Tell that fucker who you are ❤️ Unfair that in the same page I have to choose between squealing over Holly’s incredible new hair or over the new Gina lore. Oh my God. Holly’s Mistress of Ceremonies. I can practically hear Ryan grinding his teeth. Shit. Xu’s suspects Morosini. I mean, obviously he would, but yikes. And aaaaa Angela! What were you about to sayyyyyy? Cheering for the girl who jumped overboard and telling myself very firmly that she didn’t drown. WOW, this is a dark episode! JOSIE! And Dr Mason! Love the girls ganging up on him. Welcome to your redemption arc, dude :3 I want to see more of armed Janella. Maybe with some knives. Or a bazooka. And wearing a huge suit of armour. I just want to know she’s protected. Lmao at Connor being a second thought even to his wife.

Tiki D

Im wondering if Mason's redemption would be getting his "Just Desserts" by the girls by turning him into a woman as for payback and offered for Xu's contest.

Tiki D

I wonder Emily's disguise is like?

Tiki D

I bet Emily would not just find out about Jack's mental and physical changes, but Jill's "other activities" from making out with Holly and later Grant (Mainland) to becoming Xu's Handler of two girls.

Tiki D

By the time, Emily arrives to the island, Conner would be long gone to due the foreshadowing that was shown from the last two chapters between him and Davis.

Tiki D

Mason is about to" walk a mile" in his formal victims shoes, permintly.

Maggie Heels

Mason maybe is a spineless bug... but that bug has extremely precious knowledge... only he knows how to make Jill out of Jack physically... so his knowledge is too precious to bury him so quickly... ❣️❣️❣️

Maggie Heels

When Emily meet Jill that will be interesting LOL... Jack belongs to past... Emily has a sister now... much, much smarter and confident regarding her future... ❣️❣️❣️

Zoe Storm

Another incredible episode. Excellent work, Emory.

ckarya

Em, your art with the characters is amazing. It looks like Holly hasn't just grown out her hair... I don't know if it's a wonderbra or the dress or if she's had more than just her hair done....😍 Looks like the chips are starting to move, we'll see how it all turns out, but if your art is a hoot, the story I don't know if it's equal or better! I want to meet Gina! PS: as they say where I come from, Mason, "every pig gets its own Saint Martin", I think you're going to get a taste of your own medicine - never better said....

Ella Cherry

Oh... The coming out party is getting more promising at every chapter! Can't wait!

Bowie897

So... it seems Emily may be the only cis female at the dinner. I would be very careful if I were her!!!

Tiki D

Emory, here another alternate reality stories of Jack and Jill: What if Jack and Mason switch positions (Jack working for Xu and Dr. Mason being the victim)? Jack (Not Jill in this timeline) got hired by Xu as a handler due an open job opportunity on Xu's Island. He doesn't want to work on the island, but check out the ladies. Months earlier, Dr. Mason noticed that his lab is empty and message from Xu played on TV. He wanted his Super Hormones project, which was a success on Jason, shared his project with other upper doctors in Xu's department. Xu rewards Mason with a "taste of his own medicine" by Davis knocking Mason and inject him his Super Hormones serum. Then takes him to a farmilar cell (Jack's cell from the original timeline). This timeline would similar to the early chapters of 1-4, like Jack checking out Mason/Pre-Melissa beauty and body. He also gets to know her and trying her scientific mind. Davis would try touch Melissa's body, but Jack stand for her. Davis would push him out of the way, but Jack would grab and tumble down with Melissa into the lake. On lake surface, Jack would accidentally touch Melissa's breast, who would be turned on, but uncomfortable at the same time. Their feelings would reach ahead during the shower scene. They would both check out their bodies from a distance. Instead of being awkward about it (like Jack/Pre-Jill was in the original timeline), Mason/Pre-Melissa felt Jack's muscles and wants to make out with, but was interrupted by Davis from the speaker for Jack to come the office. Mason/Pre-Melissa gave Jack a kiss on the mouth and would wait for him.

sketchyqueen

oh gosh everything is coming to a head!! lovely work emory!!! the real question is, is this the last phase of Jack and Jill??? Gosh I can’t wait for more

ckarya

No, she has said that this one (8) and two more remain.

Wojtek

The new Holly looks so stunning I barely recognized her!

Emory Ahlberg

Aww, thank you, Wocjiech! She definitely had a glow up. But for what purpose do you think? 😉

Wojtek

She will be Mistress of Ceremony on Coming Out dinner, she should present herself accordingly, I wouldn't be surprised if you dressed her in some BDSM mistress outfit 🤔?

dov

we need more holly dick

Emory Ahlberg

YAY! Yes, Angela is truly starting to own her power! 💪 And I'm so happy with Holly's fabulous new hair, too! Yeah, this was definitely a darker episode. But it's always darkest before the (second) dawn, right? I'm loving Phase 8, but I also really, really can't wait for Phase 9 when all of this buildup starts to pay off! There's still a couple more pieces to move into place, though... 😊 Josie and Dr. Mason's scene was so much fun to write! Josie has been WAITING for that moment. And armed Janelle? YES! She'll definitely have more moments of badassery.

Emory Ahlberg

Emily still doesn't believe she has a "sister" and thinks Jack can be saved. Her opinion may change as soon as she sees Jill with her own eyes...

Emory Ahlberg

Xu has accumulated all of that knowledge now. Dr. Mason's continued research on the island was invaluable, but now Second Dawn has it all.

Emory Ahlberg

Emily is still under the impression that she has a brother. I think it'll be quite hard for her to accept the fact that "Jill" is her sister now.

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Zoe!!! 💖 I'm looking forward to bringing Phase 8 in for a landing.

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, ckarya! 💖You know I always try to give my all when it comes to the art and the story. I'm finally getting to a point where I like how most everything looks. Of course, there's always still room for improvement. Holly has definitely gone all out with her look! She has been dressing pretty conservatively for most of the series so that might be why it seems that she has had other "enhancements." Gina is like the Xuniverse's version of "Boba Fett" 😂 As for Dr. Mason, you've put it perfectly – he's about to experience firsthand the consequences of his actions. It's definitely going to be an eye-opening journey for him... or her! 😉

Emory Ahlberg

You'll see, Tiki! The question is...will it fool Second Dawn???

Emory Ahlberg

Knowing Second Dawn, that might actually make her the safest one there, Bowie. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Ella! Phase 9 is going to be intense.

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Nina!!!! Yeah, the story is indeed moving towards a climax -- it's a little hard to believe! But Jack & Jill isn't quite over yet. There's still a lot more story to tell, and more twists and turns await. I've always planned for there to be 10 phases in total. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Hey Tiki! What an intriguing spin on the Jack and Jill universe! I'm really digging the role reversal you've come up with – it adds a fun twist to the story. It'd be fun to see how Jack and Melissa's relationship could evolve in this alternate scenario. 😊

stacy C

Wow Holly looks HOT! Looks like Mason might be reaping what he sowed hehe x

Emory Ahlberg

Yep! If Xu has his way, Mason will soon find out just how powerful his "super hormones" relaly are!

Jessica Thence

This was a really fun part, but I apologize. You're going to need to remind me who the girl in the striped bikini is again? Isn't she someone's sister? And for that matter who were the other two girls at the end? In the striped top and the blue hair?

Jessica Thence

I actually went back and found your old character descriptions.