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Nikki confronts both her (shrinking) present and her past (sins)...

24 pages in the next episode of Half Sisters! YAY!

I'm so enjoying writing / art-ing Season 2 and I hope you are, too. The evolution of Zach and Nikki over these episodes has been really satisfying. But they still have a long way to go!

I can't wait to hear your thoughts! 💖

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Alyson Greaves

this episode just transferred Nikki’s heart problems to me it was all so sad and then so sweet and then so ARGH

sketchyqueen

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh the end!!!!! Emory!!!! Don’t leave me hanging like this 😭😭😭 amazing work as always and i really hope we can see nikki grow more, it’s been interesting as heck!

Maggie Heels

OKAY I need definitely much more time to process last photo... (yes from now on I'll call Emory's renders photos...) OMG page 17 face expression is sooo real... Nikki very slowly is realizing her karma... that's good... and damn... why on every photo with her in it I need to read captions slower and couple times? She's constantly distracting meee ❣️❣️❣️ P.S. I can't wait when "friends" will change into "friends with benefits" :} P.S.2 on photos 20-21 cried like a lil baby...

Gemma

Great chapter. I wish the chapters were longer. I’m just sinking into the flow of story, counting down each of the pages, wishing for more. Love how Nikki is looking. Wondering if there will be thought bubbles which capture her ‘confusing thoughts, feelings, outside her bravado , that she experiences whilst feeling Zachs embrace.by

Gemma

Thanks again Emory

Doctor Stepford

I wonder if zach father Will let Nikki escape her future as zachs girlfriend . What Will he do 🙉

Ella Cherry

A whole mix of emotions in this one. I got anxious with Nikki, then it felt cute with Zach’s story, and to finish, I got very curious. Great chapter!

Gemma

Agree with MaggieHeels in image 17 Nikki looks so vulnerable and real, but my favourite image is 22, just before the hug, Nikki looking up at Zach

Zoe Storm

I love these kids. Imagine I put that neighborhood tree meme here.

ckarya

As always a fantastic episode! I like the camaraderie between these two and that they are untangling their problems...now they will have to untangle another one according to the last page - step by step..... PS: Em, Nikki's breasts are perfect! don't make them too much bigger, we already have a fair share of busty ones hehehehe.😘

punarotta

More bonding :D ...and cliffhanger - anything could happen next... Jessica's previous meet with Zach went ok(ish) and Nikki was mentioned - so... hopeful?

animalmusic

from the looks of the nipples, the boobs look like they will fill out a little more. How does Nikki not see her butt!! great back view Emory!!

Wojtek

Yes cliffhanger with Jessica was for me surprise! I look forward to continuing the story.

Bowie897

It is a shame that Zach and Nikki cannot change places. I think Zach would be very happy as the girl in love with Nikki. And Nikki would prefer to be the macho male.

Emily

Should I know who the girl was at the end?

Emory Ahlberg

Yes, that’s Jessica — last scene with Sandy in Season 1.

stacy C

Why didn't Nikki just look in the mirror when he was trying to make his 'thing' work again haha x

Estacia

This is such a cute love story with these two. Nikki is my favorite! Zach has really won me over this last few times we’ve seen him. 🥰

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Alyson! Haha, sorry not sorry for the emotional rollercoaster ride! Poor Nikki does is going through a lot, but at least she's got Zach by her side to help her through it all. That's definitely not something she would've imagined thinking only a month ago but she's actually beginning to change! Yes, it's as slow as a snail stuck in molasses, but it's happening! 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Aw, thank you so much, Nina!!! 😊 I promise not to leave you hanging for too long. Nikki's journey is far from over. She's got more growing (both literally and figuratively) to do. 💖

Emory Ahlberg

Wow! Big compliment on the renders, Maggei! Thanks so much! I'm glad Nikki's expressions are feeling realistic. I work hard on those in particular, tbh. Isn't it thrilling watching her slowly come around? And oh, the distractions she creates...c'est magnifique! 💖 I can't officially confirm or deny any "friends with benefits" possibilities, but the journey ahead has plenty of twists, turns, and perhaps some steamy surprises. P.S.2: Don't worry, we'll get you a box of tissues for those emotional moments! 😉🧻

Emory Ahlberg

I really appreciate that, Gemma! I wish they could be longer too, but my poor brain can only churn out so much at a time without exploding! I try to make each chapter count while maintaining the quality you all deserve. I don't usually use thought bubbles since I go for a sort of "cinematic" style. Nikki's (very) confused thoughts and feelings will definitely surface, though. Usually, I put these in her emails to Scott / Sandy. Nikki's inner turmoil and her growing connection with Zach will definitely lead to more than a few of these, haha. 💖

Gemma

Thanks Emory for your feedback and sharing of insights into your writing style and processes. Forgive my impatience, l love this story so much. As I have said earlier I particularly love the feminine vulnerability and innocence you captured of Nikki in image 22 in chapter 32. I agree with Ckarya in regard to Nikki’s breasts, they look gray and don’t need to get too much bigger.

Emory Ahlberg

Your impatience is more than forgiven -- it's a big compliment! 😊 And thank you so much for remarking on those specific moments / images. They're among my favorites, as well.

Emory Ahlberg

Almost certainly not -- at least, not very willingly! Making Nikki out of Nicholas took a lot of money. That's not an investment he'll let go of lightly. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Ella! I experienced the same feelings while writing this episode, so I accomplished my mission by transferring them to you. 😂

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Gemma! Yeah, she really does look quite cute in that image. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

I'm enjoying their bonding a great deal as well, ckarya. 😊 Jessica showing up is definitely tossing a wrench into whatever plans they had before -- and she doesn't seem happy!

Emory Ahlberg

Well, I wouldn't say it was very okay since Scott/Sandy had to threaten him to get him to reign in the other football players. Jessica definitely seems upset about something, though!

Emory Ahlberg

Quite possibly you're right and her boobs! And I think Nikki doesn't see her butt because she's chooses not to look back there. She's too concerned about what she's losing up front than to worry about what she's GAINING in the back. 😂

Emory Ahlberg

Aww, I think you're right, Bowie. Zach certainly seems to have a better disposition than Nikki when it comes to this... but Zach's father seems even more militant when it comes to signs of femininity in his son than even Nikki's dad.

Emory Ahlberg

😉 Too much cognitive dissonance, I guess! "That girl is hot but she's not me even though I know she's me...!"

Emory Ahlberg

Aww, I'm really happy you're enjoying their story, Estacia. These two are on a long journey, that's for sure. Where does it lead? We'll see. 😊

Gemma

Hi Emory, i don’t want to take up too much of this comment section of your patron site. I am wondering if you have a site or address in which I could provide more expansive comment and musing on Half Sisters.

Emory Ahlberg

Hi Gemma! Of course. My email address is emoryahlberg@gmail.com 😊

Jessica Thence

This one was fun at the beginning . Then it was sad. Then heartwarming and sad. Then funny. "Like 100% homo". Lol.