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Chris finally gets a good night's sleep...

This episode was both fun and hard to write. Chris and Kayla love each other, but is love always enough to keep two people together?

But, of course, there's also a larger story out there. Bella is still on the loose, isn't she? 😉

I can't wait to read your thoughts!

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Gemma

Intriguing as always Emory.

Gemma

I feel so sorry for Chris. Ben is still a fly in the ointment and so determined to undermine Chris and Kayla’s relationship. I had hoped the night of passion he gave Kayla would be the beginning of her reconnecting and re-embracing him in his new feminine form. Maybe if it was Chris rather than Kris in control she may be able open to re- embrace this new version of her fiancé? As I said Emory you have left your readers guessing which direction this story will take!?

Maggie Heels

Oh Kyla... Leaving Chris/Kris in bed was a clear signal... He still loves you as strong as before "the incident" but clearly you can't say the same... You loved Chris for sure but you definitely have little to no feelings toward Kris. Unfortunately to you he can't be Chris back again... It is either you learn to love Kris or you'll break up... Maybe you're "too heterosexual" for him...? You say he performed cold and robotic on you... I saw a great skill and a lot of experience backed up by enormous amount of passion because of you... I hardly see your future as lovers... friends maybe but leaving him in bed and going to another bed alone while he was still sleeping was kinda hurtful... Nonetheless I'll keep my fingers crossed for your learning skills ;) And Ben... please continue to dig into that case the more you dig the sooner you'll know what happened... ON YOURSELF muahahahaha. Can't wait to see Kyla's reaction when she'll see Benjamina for the first time :}

Alison St John

What an incredible creator of TG Fiction you are, the way you tear at the heartstrings with your character creation is sublime, to allow the reader to actually care for your characters no matter how tragic their circumstances is remarkable, I really feel for Kris in this sequence of events 💔

Ella Cherry

I love how deep your stories go! And the ending was great. I'm more hooked than ever!

Elrod W

And as I suspected, Kayla DID notice the difference between Kris and Chris, that Kris gives and gives but doesn't know how to reciprocate. It's clear the love and passion is there, but is it for someone that Kayla fears no longer exists? Is Kayla going to figure out how to help Chris in time, or is Ben-the-asshat going to screw things up for Chris and Kayla and never give her that chance? What happens first - Ben interferes by deliberately trying to sabotage Chris and Kayla, or Chris finds some incriminating evidence of Kayla's involvement with Ben and Ben's profession of love? And what if there are other secrets that Kayla has kept from Chris due to losing him and now can't because of how those secrets might totally destroy Chris? This is a magnificent story of human suffering and emotion and need for healing. I think that we're going to find a LOT more secrets and events, and some twisted plotting and scheming. I am going to wait quite impatiently for the next chapter, and the next, and the one after that, until the story is complete and we know how all the loose ends tie together! (I am so rooting for Ben and his associate to be the next ones 'converted' by Bella!) This is SO GOOD!

Bowie897

I find it interesting that the Kris personality could not just immediately flip to the Chris personality (i.e. talk in the masculine voice). Only after a night's sleep would the Chris personality be able to come out. I wonder if Norman Bates had the same problem???

ckarya

Wow, the new episode, as always, is very good. With the comments that precede me I can't contribute much, since I completely agree with them. It only remains for me to reemphasize, at the risk of becoming tiresome, that your art is incredible, but your stories are amazing. 🤯 The Chris/Kris split personality is going to be a challenge for Kayla to overcome. She still only sees Chris, as Chris 1.1 not the Chris/Kris 2.0 he/she is now, so they both have a long way to go.... ...and Cindy! what a nice surprise to see her back in the story. 😍 Personal theory for the next chapter: Cindy doesn't come out to Benjamin. She denies knowing who she is. Benjamin leaves with the fly behind his ear... and is fingered by Bella and the Cunt's organization, since Cindy's employer belongs to or helps that organization.... Hello Benjamina! ...but at the same time Cindy contacts Chris to warn him, because Chris was not sincere with Kayla and the Police when he told them that he did not find Cindy when he was released, but he did find her and both are teaming up to take down the Organization (this would be part of the subplot of Chris' release "agreement" and the month he has to execute it or to start it...) 😊

Elrod W

I'm not surprised that Kris couldn't just flip back. He still hasn't integrated Kris into his core being - Kris is a shield he's used to using when he had to perform sex. He had to keep Kris there after the act because it wasn't emotionally safe to switch back after a client - perhaps he had another coming and didn't dare take a "Chris break" for fear of not being able to turn Kris back on. If so, then it's habit that his Chris personality only came to the forefront after sleep, or when it was 'safe' again and the client had left. Kayla was still there - habit said keep Kris until the customer has left. His ife for 3 years was Sex = Kris. Poor Chris has a long ways to go before he can be intimate with Kayla with Chris as his active personality. Either that, or he has to speed up integrating his two personalities into one. And therein lies fear - what if Kayla doesn't like Kris? Or an integrated Chris/Kris? Chris must suspect she notices the difference, but that Chris/Kris duality sthe elephant in the room, and I suspect it's going to take a long time for the two to e ven begin to talk about it, let alone work to embrace and accept it. The big question is can they solve that before other events overtake them.

stacy C

As disguises go.....I must say that's a doozy! x

Tamsin Davis-Langley

Oh my gosh, Emory. 😲 This story is amazing in its depth and beauty and sadness. I can’t wait to see where you go from here.

Emory Ahlberg

Gemma, I love your thoughts on the story and the dynamics between Chris, Kayla, and Ben! Yeah, Ben's presence does create HUGE tension in the relationship. He just can't seem to fully accept Chris's new feminine form - or that it was forced on him. Is that only because it would mean he "stole" his best friend's girl while he was being tormented? Kayla's reconnection with Chris is a really complex journey for her. Will she make it all the way? Part of why I wanted to create this story is to answer that question. Chris's transformation (I hope) raises questions about identity and desires... and the delicate balance between embracing change and holding onto the past. Thank you! 💕

Emory Ahlberg

Maggie, you always have quite the perceptive eye! Yeah, leaving Chris/Kris in bed was indeed a significant (and sad) signal from Kayla. Obviously, she's still struggling to fully embrace Chris. While she may still have strong feelings for him, accepting "Kris" as a romantic partner seems challenging for her. It's DEFINITELY possible that Kayla's heterosexuality plays a role in her struggle to connect, but I think it's also that she could sense it wasn't wholly Chris she was sleeping with.

Emory Ahlberg

Awww. Thank you, Alison! I appreciate your kind words and your connection with the characters. Thank youuu! 💙

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Ella!!! Your excitement fuels my creativity! 😁 (well, your excitement + coffee)

Emory Ahlberg

Elrod, your excitement is palpable! 😁 Yeah, the dynamics between Kayla, Chris (Kris?), and Ben are just layers and LAYERS of complexity and potential conflict. Will Kayla find a way to help Chris in time? How will Ben's interference complicate matters? What happens when the stories collide? Hmmm! And (for me) it's fun to think which revelation may come first—Ben deliberately sabotaging Chris and Kayla, or Chris uncovering incriminating evidence of Kayla's involvement with Ben. And trust me, there are indeed many more secrets, events, and twists in the upcoming episodes. 😊 Thank you for your kind words! 💖💖💖

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Tamsin!!! Lots more from here... twists and turns, emotions to explore, and new revelations! I'm really excited for Season 2! 😁

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Bowie! Yeah, the portrayal of Kris and Chris as distinct personalities is at an all-time high here. It would seem Kris gained much more "power" than what we originally saw when Chris was in captivity. Now, when she is "summoned," (for lack of a better word) it takes a good night's sleep to revert back to Chris. It's almost as if Chris's mind needs that time to process and shift from one identity to the other. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, ckarya!!! Your comments are never tiresome! They’re always insightful and appreciated! Thank you for your kind words about the story and the art! 😊 Yes, the Chris/Kris dynamic is going to be a big challenge for Kayla and Chris and any future relationship they have. How do they navigate and accept the changes in Chris's identity and desires? Is it possible? Hmmm. After all, Cindy (as far as we know) is not a lesbian. Now, she is saying that Chris' altered body doesn't matter to her... but what about his altered mind? How long can she endure "Kris" being a part of their relationship? Cindy is back! Yes! And your theories for the next chapter are intriguing! I won't say much because I don't want to spoil anything, but I will say that you're on the right track with Cindy. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

And thank you, Elrod!!! Your insights are really on point. Yeah, Chris is still struggling to integrate Kris into his core being, and that is no easy task. For Season 1, he was basically ignoring that she even existed - and even went so far as to deny himself any sex hormones of any kind. So, yeah, the question becomes how will Chris fully integrate Kris into his personality? If he can't, what does that mean for his relationship with Kayla? After all, she didn't sign up to be in a polyamorous relationship. 😉 What happens if Chris can never fully shed his "Kris" personality? Is that something Kayla can live with? And does that mean Kris needs to "die?" (Luckily Kris doesn't seem to have any desire to 'take over' except when Chris brings her out)

Kirsten Roberts

I love all your stories but I think I love this story the most. It’s almost painful waiting for a new episode to come out. Best thing you’ve ever done

sketchyqueen

absolutely incredible writing emory! you really capture the essence of being left out in the bedroom. especially when chris become kris, the whole situation feels eerie! honestly can’t wait for cop guy to become the one Kris turns over to become the next girl, calling it now hehe

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Kirsten!!! I'm humbled and grateful for your kind words. 😊 I'm just trying to tell the best stories I can, and I'm glad that you feel something from this one. I'm excited for what's coming next - more drama, more twists, more emotions!

Emory Ahlberg

Wow, thank you, Nina! And... Oooh, an interesting theory on Ben! You're always a couple steps ahead! 😄

Elrod W

I’m on travel and bored, so I wanted to toss out directions I think Emory could go with regard to Cindy 1) Cindy tells Ben 2) Cindy doesn’t tell Ben After that convo, or lack of, Cindy could A) Get in touch with Chris – which had previously happened B) Find Chris and warn her C) Try to find Chris but fail Following that, i) The Cunt hunts down and ‘punishes’ Cindy ii) Bella and The Cunt don’t, but Ben’s partner does something to Cindy iii) Cindy flees, fearing retribution from Bella If Ben gets info from Cindy, a) He confirms to Kayla that Chris isn’t hallucinating (fat chance of that!) b) Keeps the info to himself and continues to lie to Kayla

Emory Ahlberg

Very fun ideas, Elrod!!! You may be onto some of the things I have planned... Hehe

Jessica Thence

Wow! I hadn't read the last parts in awhile and I didn't see that coming!