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Nikki can't go back to sleep after her nightmare...

Yay! It's Episode 43 of Half Sisters and we're back with Nikki for a little while. Sandy and Nikki are in different places in their journeys (and they don't have the same destinations), so it's really fun to switch between them.

I had some fun with the format in this episode. You'll see what I mean... Please let me know what you think. 😊

And I can't wait to hear your thoughts! 

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Alyson Greaves

Oh, the assumptions Nikki’s made about Sandy’s hair. Oh dear. Also, hey, not only did Nikki finally allow her character to grow, SHE NOTICED! Well done, Nikki! Also, she’s together enough to remember the correct pronoun to use when texting Jessica. Incredible. Jesus, Nikki. Your past sucks. Your DAD sucks. Oh shit, she did the girl voice long enough she can’t do a good guy voice any more. Been there. But, uh, I wanted it :3 Nikki… Are you having FUN dressing up? The texts. I’m dying. Emory, this was amazing. And must have taken AGES, lmao.

Zoe Storm

Jessica is like "Well this is unexpected but thank you for the treat, doesn't happen every day that a hot girl sends me selfies unprompted"

Alyson Greaves

“I kind of want to rail this idiot.”

Emory Ahlberg

“Also, does this clueless B not know Zach is VERY gay???”

Maggie Heels

OMG, OMG, OMG ❣️❣️❣️ Yeah? YEAH? Dig this... Your mom is a girl... eee no wait Your mom is a woman eee yyyy ekhmm Your woman is your mom, eeee hmmm Your girl is your woman..... eeeehhh? Aww FUCK IT..... gulp, gulp, gulp You all suck at dis game you n000bs....!!!! Who had best KD ratio? WHO!? Yes bow to your mistress, boyz... eeee oh shit what i just said? < signing out > Nikki is AMAZING........ page 8 we're almost there...... it has begun ❣️❣️❣️ NGL that posing for Zach was adorable as fuuuck WAY TO GO girly Nikki... you're not self-aware of changes yet but they're already observable :}

Sara Dune Tone

Omg!!! Nikki is soooo femme!!! Loving every second of this. She’s got this sweet nurturing side, i her a feeling that she’ll be the real submissive one by the end of this… and I think she’s getting way more into boys that she realises already! She got so pouty when Zach ingnored her texts eheheheh… I am feeling this super strong “tgirl coed” wave coming on…

Gemma

Oh Emory, what an amazing chapter. You really know how to write for Nikki and capture range of differing feelings, emotions. I love the subtle physical and psychological changes taking place. I also loved how she spoke about herself as Nick in the third person. Great to see how her voice (unconsciously) as she automatically can’t help but slip into female register. Loved the indignity she experienced around being perceived as female and dismissive feedback and weight being given to her insightful strategies (being a former quarter back) because she’s as just being a girl. It was interesting to witness some new shifts and insights into disregard often experienced by girls/ woman by ‘boys/men’. I could go on and on with my praise for this chapter, whether it be ‘her automatic singing the girl part in song,’ to her ‘dressing to please her man’ (no matter what her said rationale was..). Then the final, ‘oh crap moment’ with the inadvertent email to Jessica that ends up opening up new possibilities in forthcoming chapter/s. I wonder who would be submissive one if they were to get together? Also what forthcoming changes will take place in the sexual role and power dynamic between her and Josh? Lastly, wow, such ‘girly like selfies.’ To conclude the chapter, such beautiful pictures of the ever increasing pretty Nikki. Amazing Thanks Emory, can’t wait to read next chapter.

Cryofly

Great chapter! This was the first time where it felt like Nikki teetered over to the other side of the pendulum, unconsciously acting more female than male. It's pretty telling as to where her character is going to go for the time being, and I'm all for it. She's definitely good at playing the part of a pouting girlfriend. lol

Robertlouis

I won’t comment on what others already have, but what hit me like a train in this episode was Nikki’s extreme vulnerability and the fact that more than anyone else in this story, just how terribly alone she is. Just when you’re fed up with her acting like an immature asshole you’re hit with huge reminders why she is like she is. There are other allies, like Sandy and now, it appears, Jessica, but the key to her sanity and salvation, at least in the short term, is Zach. She’s slowly coming round to the realisation that at the very least they need each other, and, who knows, this otherwise odd couple might symbiotically turn out to be just right for each other after all. And in any case, Nikki is just too damn pretty to have any kind of realistic thoughts of becoming male again.

findesiecle

Page #15...Wow! Perfect perspective, lighting and shadowing. Page #22...Thank you...

sketchyqueen

honestly stellar work emory, i think the inclusion of nikki playing fortnite and subconsciously talking higher is so real. i will say as someone who plays quite a lot of games, men are a LOT worse than little statements btw like they just immediately get sexual almost instantly and ignore any call outs. would’ve been interesting to see nikki react to that. your art is genuinely so pretty tho and i can’t wait for jessica to see nikki again >:)

Ella Cherry

So many layers in this chapter! Love it! ❤️

Stormfries

the female side gains the upper hand

Omagathief

I think Alyson is talking about how Nikki’s dad sucked by what he did when he was on the booze

Gemma

Questions tentatively raised by this chapter around Nikki. Are the shifts, and Nikki’s more relaxed attitudes around her views of the physical attraction between ‘dick and muscles’ and ‘puss and boobs’ indicative of subtle shifts taking place and losing up of her sexual orientation? Has ‘having titties’ and being more able to view them beyond just objects of sexual attraction and desire further suggestive of this? Has her loss of masculine muscle, and will any further losses she may incur bring about further shifts in what (who) she is physically attracted to? So many questions Emory you have left with us, your readers that we patiently have to wait to be revealed in future chapters.

non anon

Love this but little sad we won't get another episode this month. Also boobs are nice but we need more cake! Nikki's back side is looking nice!

pe zr

very very nice mental work!

Rachel Ashley

Charge your fucking phone Nikki.

Emory Ahlberg

🤣 Thank you for noticing this ridiculous detail I put in which I feel reflects deeply into Nikki's character!!! 💖

Emory Ahlberg

For real she's the kind of girl who has her phone get down to 5% and she's like 'it's fine.'

stacy C

Drunk text to the wrong person......we've all been there LoL x

Emory Ahlberg

At least she didn’t reveal anything TOO compromising… Right??

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you! ♥️ I soo love exploring the mental state of the characters as they go through all of this… it’s so fun!

Emory Ahlberg

Aw, yeah, I understand. But January will be a double Half Sisters month! And I hear you on the “cake!” Look forward to the X-mas pinup. 😁

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Ella! Yes, Nikki is like an onion… she’s thin-skinned and she makes you cry. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks C! Yeah, she got a little tipsy and the less-inhibited Nikki came out in force. Good for her! Of course, now she has to deal with the ramifications of texting Jessica by mistake - but maybe it won’t be a big deal. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

The bourbon certainly seemed to unlock something in her! Was it there all along? 😉 And yeah, she’s definitely got that sullen, pouty, “why isn’t he paying attention to me!?” vibe down! ♥️

Joe

I think Nikki’s egg is starting to break…

Emory Ahlberg

Aww, thank you so much, Fin! You know how I like the images to be cinematic and pretty ♥️

Emory Ahlberg

LMAO!!! 😂 I love this, Maggie. Yeah, I think Nikki is actually really amazing at Fortnite and she’s pissed as hell nobody is paying attention to her. She definitely had the highest kills out of her loser team! I really loved her selfies too!

Emory Ahlberg

Aaaaaa - Thank you so much, Nina! Yeah, Nikki has gotten so excellent at her femme voice (she's a perfectionist) that it's getting a little more difficult for her to easily "switch." Oops! And you’re absolutely right, a lot of guys love to make gross, sexualized comments in games. I decided to start Nikki off 'slow' because her reaction to THOSE kind of comments would've taken up a whole episode lmao. But she loves games, so she'll be back on...and things will escalate! And thank you so much!!! 💖

Emory Ahlberg

I love this, Gemma! Great observations! Nikki definitely still loves girls, I think, but she has a new perspective on how she relates to men now. Her muscles and all that were a huge part of her self-image, which she has been forced to redefine, which has been a bit of a blessing because she wasn’t the best person in the world as Nick. Who will she become? Who will she be attracted to? We’ll have to find out! 💖

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks Robert! Yeah, Nikki is definitely very alone - and she does have these moments of vulnerability, which she would never admit to anyone. She’s prideful too. But, she’s growing. And I think you’re right, Zach is going to be a very important part of her life, in one way or another. 💖

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Gemma! You always have such great insights and observations. Yes, Nikki is changing in small ways all the time, and she doesn’t even realize it. I think she’s so focused on soldiering through life that she doesn’t have time to really reflect on the changes she’s STILL going through, even being off the island. And as for Jessica and Nikki, well, that may be up to a vote... 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Alyson! Yeah, poor Nikki, she has a lot of baggage. Not just her own, but her dad’s too. And she has to deal with it all by herself. It’s hard ️- ️but she’s getting there! 😊 I’m really glad you liked the texts! It was fun writing those lmao. I mean, I had to do a lot of research because I've definitely NEVER drunk-texted anyone. But how dare you suggest she's enjoying dressing up ️in girly things. She's a GUUUUY. 😉 P.S. With the "guy voice," I just picture Nikki's perfectionism coming through. She wants that high score on the "voice feminization" app!

Alyson Greaves

“And the high score for the best end-run on the stupid voice app goes to... Nikkiiiii! ...Uh, Nick. Nicholas. Nickerdoodle. Yeah.”