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As a thank you to EFon for contributing to the writing of PAL I've been meaning to make a selection of images (not a huge amount, because of time constraints) for his upcoming CYOA project Pervert Action: Origins. This is a design I thought I would share with you guys in case you had any feedback for me.

The story EFon is writing is about how the Pervert Action universe really began, when the sinister 'oni' first appeared in feudal Japan. It's quite a long story he's written up and a major effort on his part.


The character is Azami, a rich woman, aged 35 who has grown jealous of her young daughter's looks. Azami herself feels that her looks are fading, although that is debatable.


I built Azami using 3D resources that I plan to actually re-use elsewhere, because I didn't want to invest in new resources for someone else's project (perhaps you understand). Therefore you're likely to see at least this skin texture and hairstyle again, albeit with some differences.

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Rex

There isn't anything bad in see use more than one time some resources, the image is good, but the eyes are a bit strange.

BBBen

Thanks. Do you know what is bothering you about the eyes? The reflection? The position? The shape?

Rex

Maybe the bigger problem is that the eyes are maybe a bit too big or is the position, I'm not sure.

BBBen

Yeah, I've had issues with the default Aiko 4 eye size being a bit too large. I'll play with the shape a bit.

BBBen

I've had a go at tweaking the eyes; I changed the size and position and I do think the new version looks better.