Large Marge- concept (DM) (Patreon)

Maybe not everyone knows it, but one of my favorite Simpsons episodes is "Large Marge", especially the part where Marge realizes that she's getting a lot of attention from others because of her new "attributes" lol. Some time ago I made this concept drawing taking as reference an illustration from this episode, I also took inspiration from the Death Note parody comic, I liked how the characters looked in this style so I tried to do it my way. I never shared it since it wasn't finished but I would like to know what you think of this version! If you didn't receive the DM let me know