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We have hit 250 pages! While I didn't plan for this stuff to coincide with a few major changes, we have a few notable things going on.

Victory did her first Trade. She has been changed by nanobots before, but the first time she has done a trade. I'm keeping Victory mostly intact and making some smaller, surface level changes to maybe help out Victory.

Lexi has lost her Scottish Accent. Ultimately, it I felt it didn't work as well as I had wanted to. Because Steph's accent/language trade was much more dramatic, it was easier to showcase her struggles without hindering the readers. Typing out the Scottish accent and slang/language really becomes unreadbale very quickly. With the additional narrative weight Lexi is taking on, I can't leave her with something that either has no effect or leaves people struggling to read it.

We did a poll for Lexi's next trade. We are still doing that. Just got pushed back a little bit.

Next page, we'll check in with Stephanie and Mina as they land in another country.

We'll come back to Lexi and Victory next month!

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Natalia

RIP Lexi’s Scottish Accent I’m glad it happened, but I’m also glad it’s dead. Lol

roseleaf

It was a fun ride while it was there.

Amelia Reisinger

Now I REALLY want to know what the trades were that she said no to

roseleaf

So many things. At least one of them had to have been something mental. Clearly none of them were height, as she's still Lexi height.

Pop26

At first I was confused of what she traded then I realized her boobs are bigger.

roseleaf

I thought it would be more fun to not point it out.

Speedball

Oh thank goodness, I liked V's general design so much I was worried we'd lose that.

roseleaf

I like her general vibe alot as well. I knew I couldn't do anything too dramatic. But I was required by law to have Lexi try to egg her into a trade.