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Open Trade - Pg 102 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-10-09 04:14:13
Edited:
2024-11-12 17:48:15
Imported:
2026-06
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Content

Date night comes to an end. Or does it. 

Should they have a second date?

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Comments

Sam Mann

Hmm, let me think ab- Yes!!!

roseleaf

So, which of them pays for the second date?

Halima Abdi

Time for Round Two! As a note, for panel one, Alex could say "Or you could stay here and go another round." And for panel two, Xaiver could use "they're" instead of "they are"; It'd just sound more natural for them.

roseleaf

I personally like "one more" over "another" in this instance. I like that it is slower and more deliberate. "they're"/"they are" will probably also be suggested by femur, and likely be changed at some point. Its one of those lines I rewrote like 5 times, but I'll agree "they're" is smoother. Also for completion, Stephanie stopped using contractions when her primary language changed. But I'm sure I missed one somewhere.

Halima Abdi

Oh, I like that detail about Stephanie!

roseleaf

Largely trying to find a balance of damaging her English, but not going so far to make her annoying to read since we hear from her the most. I also do some rewrites to simplify words or make some things a little clunky.

Halima Abdi

It's gotta be frustrating for Steph to be a Korean-speaking woman swimming in a sea of English. Reminds me of this clip from Modern Family, "Do you know how smart I am in Spanish?" https://youtu.be/pltc5rtoskM?t=6

Sam Mann

Let's say Alex

roseleaf

potentially a new dynamic duo.