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This one took me some time to write, mainly because I didn't want to break it up. I didn't want to break it up because it is the last chapter of this arc of Sasha's tale. Please enjoy it, and I will see about getting another chapter done as soon as possible. 

I also haven't forgotten about the poll for the Patron tale, expect that up tomorrow or the next day at the latest.

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Eric Naftaly

Catching up on the story, and I'm a bit confused. Sasha and her team were being sent to Center, not ordered to avoid it -- but they were placed on the slowest conveyance possible and given a circuitous route. Sasha made it clear that while leaving the train to get there faster would be a violation of orders, speeding up the train wouldn't be. And I'm unclear as to whether Dustin, with his seemingly counter-productive performance, was trying to get the result that he did: no conviction on the witch charge, but dismissal from the order such that she'd be unlikely to survive without going rogue. And why were the prosecutors presenting all those unsupported eyewitnesses, knowing that it would be impossible for Sasha to have done all that they claimed?

Nagrij

It was simple. The fix was in, and the outcome was largely unavoidable. Dustin, well you'll see his motivation and why later, if you'll allow me a slight spoil. As for the train, lack of following orders was the excuse. Even if it worked out, disobeying orders is something you can get court-martialed for in the military, or simply thrown out regardless.