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Here we are, the winner of the last poll of the year, and being written with some speed, Leases in Hell. 

I like this chapter; don't hesitate to tell me what you think. Please enjoy.

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Dallas Eden

As the old saying goes, I know I’m being paranoid, but am I being paranoid enough? Maeve is questioning all of her decisions, and rightly so - but she is also starting to forget things. She instructed Rist to take point, and then forgot about it. What else has she missed? And why was a demon meaning the city and looking for her in the desert? Who knows where she was? How did they find out? More importantly, who changed the patrol routes and why? She is trusting her demons, who seem to be anticipating her orders and going above and beyond to fulfill them. Does this mean that her position in hell is become more secure? This can’t bode well.

Teri Ann

Was this chapter cobbled together? Really couldn't tell ;-) Anyway, this patrol has been under pretty constant stress since the start, smart to let the guys have a win and something to do. Still, Maeve seems to be feeling it.

Nagrij

You're not wrong. She's stressed by how not stressed she is, which is just funny to me.