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Phanphan Phantasies - Ch2 (P22) (Patreon)

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2020-12-10 13:10:20
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2026-06
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It is time for Carlo and Lug to clarify some things -w-

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Max Freeman

Aw, he's quitting, but there's still a chance for PhanPhan to get with Lug after fucking his client. I can even tell that Caro cares deeply for PhanPhan, he should've watched over him and make sure he has the best experience. He's just trying to get laid himself, Lug so why you mad. Hope he isn't afraid of rejection or he might hurt someone with his dick size. Maybe he's just staying true to his word about waiting.

trueeutopia

I didn't think carlo could be serious (or get angry). I guess this is really serious.

trueeutopia
>>49281532

also the word decision in the second speech bubble has an "s" in the middle not a "t".

FuzzyLopunny

Dots of shame? 😂 Engagement rings? Engaged to who? Other women or men? What are dots of shame? Its all so confusing 😅

Anhes
>>49284442

They're things that will be explain later, if I continue with other characters, but at the end of this one I will add an extra page with information.

Drake Arlin

Been looking forward to this conversation. There is something unsaid between them and it needs to be resolved. Great job Anhes!

Zack Richardson

Hi Anhes, I have a couple dialog suggestions for you. In the third panel- "You know that I have to watch over him, but I'm got tired of it" You could delete *got* and it would flow better. Or perhaps Lug is a bit more formal and he'd rather say "but I've grown tired of it" "I'm not comfortable here" is good but then he follows up with "Even so, thank you for everything" Those thoughts could afford to either be in 2 separate bubbles or perhaps spaced out by a *sigh* "I'm not comfortable here anymore. *sigh* Even so... thank you for everything" Finally, in the last speech bubble, Carlo says "You makes me mad" which sounds a bit childish. Perhaps try "You disgust me"

Zack Richardson
>>49286649

Sorry, I hope the suggestions don't come across as rude. I know you put so much effort into your comics and I just want to help them be clear and make sense.

Samyoyo32

I think “Besides” might roll off the tongue a little easier.

Diego P

Wow, Carlo is an ass!

ChawchawWolf

What is the dot of shame stand for?