What 'Poison' Is MISSING [Hazbin Hotel] (Patreon)

Why 'Poison' Is WORSE Than You THINK [Hazbin Hotel Explained]

Poison is one of the most controversial and divisive songs in Hazbin Hotel - but Calxiyn has found ONE FATAL FLAW that NO ONE ELSE has talked about. Join Calxiyn as she dives into what works well about 'Poison', what does not, and ultimately the one mistake they made that tips the scales. This Video Essay will break down the instrumentation, lyrics, rhythm and characterization, as well as dive into how the STORYTELLING could have been improved. 00:00 - What we will discuss in this ultimate 'Poison' Song Analysis! 1:18 - The song's instrumentation could have been better... 4:20 - Everything wrong (and right) with Verses 1 & 2 16:04 - What's missing from this Pre-Chorus and Chorus? 26:20 - Everything wrong (and right) with Verse 3 28:28 - Did this Pre-Chorus and Chorus evolve? 30:52 - Did the ending of the song DELIVER? 34:29 - IMPORTANT KEY LESSON STARTS: Why This Song Just Doesn't Work 42:40 - KEY LESSON CONTINUED: You NEED to earn THIS as a Writer... This Is The Most Important Part Of The Video: I really like this song... BUT ♛ If you also ‘Care Too Much’… ♛ ☆ Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/Calxiyn ☆ ☆ YouTube Membership: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC9fseENfTKjgSxzc5bvbm1Q/join ☆ ☆ Discord: https://discord.gg/2s5xjdqvH6 ☆ ☆ Twitch: https://www.twitch.tv/calxiyn ☆ ☆ Twitter: https://twitter.com/calxiyn ☆ ☆ TikTok: https://www.tiktok.com/@calxiyn ☆ ☆ Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/Calxiyn_Official/ ☆ ☆ Donations / Tips: https://calxiyn.com/ or https://www.paypal.me/CalxiynOfficial ☆ ☆ Commission Me: https://ko-fi.com/calxiyn ☆ ☆ Calxiyn Main Channel: https://www.youtube.com/@calxiyn/videos ☆ #hazbinhotel