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It's finally ready for your reading pleasure, my friends! My apologies to everyone I did not respond to this past week. I figured you'd prefer that I work on the next chapter, rather than immediately respond to your comments. If was I wrong, my apologies. Enjoy the chapter, thank you as always for your support, and let's discuss in the comments!! :-)

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Sif

At some point he needs to put his foot down, it's amazing how they don't realize they are all bigots. And are encouraging a bigot.

maben00

a really great chapter as always! i love it and i cant wait to to read next months chapter when it comes out. and your torment of Wesley at the end had me in tears lol

Mr Mouse

TFTC, love the ongoing expansion of his holonovels, can't wait for the fallout from Pressman and the Romulans

Fortunis

I fucking love when Wesley pops up. I hate that character and the actor to about the same degree. On the subject of Beverly and Deanna, I know it'd probably fuck with the timeline but I'm honestly hoping they join his crew. They're both amazing at their jobs and also amazingly hot 😆. The Harry Potter stuff was fun. It's fantastic that the kids love it. All in all a great chapter.

maddsloth II

Pressman is about to ruin himself I think... lol Funny having the kids act like kids of our time with HP, the progress of deprogramming the people has begun. Poor Wesley. Page 11 How you ever received that award -Have

jeff027

The reaction to the children seeing him now. I kind want to see Klingons to react to him to his novels as well? I kind of think that was Q was his handiwork. I kind of wish for Beverly and Deanna they join his crew, but I know that it’s not going to happen

Sif

Wasn't implying he should show rage, anger, or even any real emotion at all. He's supposed to be an ally and at nearly every turn the Federation snubs their nose up at him. That's not counting the fact that Pressman somehow getting to be the person who goes to the test is beyond absurd at this point, someone in Starfleet really wants to see how far they can tweak Gothic's nose.

War sage

Another great chapter, love the image by the way. Oh I love the little return to espionage in this chapter, gotta say that's a nice little trick with the celler degradation Damn Gothic had to reveal another of his tricks...curious if he would be approached by Starfleet or the Federation itself on the stasis tech as it has so much potential not just in the medical field but in other sciences but engineering aswell as image if that work on a core breach. Well the naruto anime has a point, even a corpse can give a lot of useful information. Gothic mindset is so perfect for intelligence work. So wait does plot armor negate the notice me not effect of Gothic ship? Riker lack of intelligence concerns me at times. I really like the political/legal aspect of the chapter as it gives it depth. I feel like Pressman is using a whole of political capital/influence on this as I have no doubt he was for turning him over to the Romulans or remove the GODS network from considering, hell I bet it took alot for Pressman to get himself to witness the testing. I bet Pressman is going to show with somthing like a galaxy class or large task force. I want to say I'm surprised that the Federation was close to turning over Gothic but I'm really not, though not sure th Bajoran government or people would appreciate the Federation arresting and turning over to the Romulans the head of their navy but a resistance hero and that's not count his assistance with the rebuilding with his funds, regardless their not going to be happy with the Federation sacrificing Gothic just cause the Federation is worried about the Romulans feelings OK I have to admit I loved the bit with the kids it was awesome.

James Wise

Another chapter done! Hehe! Wesley... bwahahahhaha! Also, Q is a good wingman! Pressman is so aptly named and almost makes me think he is a dominion founder trying to remove a large piece from the board to make invasion easier. Guess we will see! Thank you for the fun chapter, the political intrigue, the cloak and dagger politics and I cannot wait for MR Pressman to eat crow!

War sage

Also I forgot got say nice work on the ending Wesley must suffer lol

War sage

I will say really curious how Pressman will go about this as while he hates Gothic with a passion, is also against the the Federation being banned from using cloaks just as much