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AAG - Chapter 13 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-03-27 04:38:37
Edited:
2021-04-06 00:10:28
Imported:
2026-06
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I would love to hear your thoughts about the chapter.  And if you spot any continuity issues/errors/oversights, please let me know so that I can make the correction.  

Have a great weekend, my friends!

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maben00

a really great chapter as always! and man do i love this story and the way you have changed and added on to it since it became fully your story and i can't wait to read future chapters as well when you have the time :-)

Joe The squatch

so, first of all, holy shit that was awesome, second of all HOLY SHIT that was brutal, and third of all Honey badger dont give a damn. Onto a more serious note, that was an amazing chapter, both in its combat aspects and having a look into gothics thought processes during such high stakes and tense situations. 30/10 from me and bravo to you good sir.

Jacob Avsec

So this will come out a bit critical but I'm just curious about how you're going to address further alien encounters. So my thoughts are on these aliens bio tech and the fact that Augment is able to easily pick up one of there weapons and kill them with it. It just seems highly unlikely that A. They would be killed by weapons of their own make since that's is a very early precaution to take B. The weapons would most likely have been biocoded and unable to be used by anyone else but the encoded owner and finally C. What is that sword made of since you said that the race that made it focused on simple and cheap to build yet effective weaponry but there is a reason why these weapons aren't really used anymore. Just honest thoughts and I'm curious on how you'll portray other races that are physically or technologically superior to the federation. First to mind is obviously the Borg. Should be quite interesting to see what you come up with but thank you for an amazing chapter. I very much enjoy the action and your character to character interaction is very immersive it's easy to put myself in either of there places. Overall an amazing job and I'm looking forward to the next!

red demon

Just joined. I finished chapter 13 and what a ride. The action was top notch. It's not just the action that I like it's also Gothic's thoughts on various subjects that I like. I'm looking forward to the aftermath of the mission, especially Gothic's thoughts on his personal kit and how to improve it.