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Here for your reading pleasure, chapter 14!

As always, I would love to get your thoughts and feedback.  If you see any issues or errors or anything that should probably be fixed, let me know that too.  It's much easier to fix at this point, then when it's posted on multiple sites in the future.

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jeff027

A great chapter

Joe The squatch

Oh I am really looking forward to the next couple of chapters, some old fashioned guerilla war on bajor with a bit of gothic spice thrown in for explosive flavor. I’ll say it again, I really look forwards to what’s next.

Darth Xion

Interesting, Gothic seems to setting himself up nicely - future crew, ship upgrades and 'connections' with various parties. Can't wait to see him cause his special brand of chaos in Bajor. Perhaps also add some scenes with the future Maquis/Badlands?

Joe

First of all absolutely love the chapter and what was added into it you set yourself up beautifully for future arcs my only question is how much more are you going to grab before fully going into the bajor arc and ds9 arc

War sage

Great chapter, I hope that that Laruen and the others show up again as it could be interesting with Gothic sending letters/messages to them from time to time or even receiving some from them, I got to say I'm really excited for the Bajoran resistance arc as not only with the training Gothic is going to get from S31 but his own military experience will make things interesting. About the battle mode for the Temptress I was wondering what made you think of that cause that was cool and it reminded me of Andromeda.

AtlasRise

The Cytherian probe perhaps? I'm not sure where in the timeline we're at exactly but in season 4 ep 19, the Enterprise encounters an alien probe that re-wires Reg Barclays brain and endows him with a greatly enhanced intellect and an unconscious desire to bring the ship to the center of the galaxy.

AtlasRise

Another opportunity Gothic could take advantage of is the nanotechnology developed by Wesley Crusher in Season 3 ep 1 where the nanites escaped and began to replicate eventually developing sapience. Just look at the Asurans and Replicators of Stargate fame for the potential the Crusher nanites could possess.

War sage

Could Gothic use Minos as a source for weapons for the Bajoran resistance as even if they are found by the Cardassians, since they are from a planet that only Gothic knows about (that we know) they can't be traced to anywhere.