Executioner's Gambit (Patreon)

I've finally got a draft together for all you beta-reader types out there, but before you dig into it, here's a few things to note:

• From the previous version, I removed Sutzir. I love the character, but nobody seemed to think he had much to add to the story.

• I also switched the perspective from 3PO to 3PL.

• I increased the innocence of one character and the guilt of another.

• I changed who made Boots.

• I've still got a bunch of comments from the previous version that I need to go through, so I will be making various minor changes to these live documents and polishing the transitions between them.

• Please DO leave comments and/or corrections directly in the documents.

121k words, 3 parts, 43 chapters:

Part 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k68khZRryKe8TmnEpXT5a_FdmjTQdWu39htfw1CIT0U/edit?usp=sharing

Part 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15vPi3_syhhdLMafLx7k3kbMWtXE70a2QZXRfIZTISrk/edit?usp=sharing

Part 3: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qVgkRJHDZSLfMQSKa3fuQcmvI9y_pu4Czt_5wXUKwJU/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks in advance for all your comments/suggestions