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---------------------------------------------------------------All characters involving this series are 18+ and older. Height or when shorten doesn't mean they are below 18. No age regression in this series whatsoever.Girlfriend Revenge schedule to release every Tuesday (draft) / Thursday (full)

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Chris Bennett

I wouldn’t mind a faster approach

Citrus

Dig the pace

TashaTheWitchQueen

I think the pacing is going well, maybe a tad slower if anything. Also she’s growing some lovely locks! ❤️

Daniel Thomas Stack

Maybe some thought bubbles for perspective on both of them. The height difference is unmistakeable but does he know what is going on at all yet? Did he notice the skirt comment with how drastic this has already been.

AshK1980

This is a decent pace to go about the transformation. Good work!

Red

I like the pace for the physical transformation. Maybe slow down when it's time to doll the new girl up in the salon.

Alison Carpenter

It's a great pace! Every page should feature a different aspect of the transformation

Nathan

Perfect

coredumperror

Correction. You're not a girl YET.

Cryofly

Great job so far. I would say a slightly slower pace could be fun so you can show some of the thoughts going on for both characters. But I do like the pace of having at least a few subtle changes happening every page.