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This is a Harry/Fleur/Tonks oneshot. I wrote this mainly to try a slightly different writing style, and I'd like to see what all of you think. It's nothing wildly different, but I wanted to try something less... I don't know, mechanical? I guess I'm just trying to stretch my wings a bit. Do you love it? Hate it? Let me know.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vkTz6GGy4e-pBHJX2qMeFEc8nnjx-Ws6oBEDZ7irnfI/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Cody

This was actually really good :) I enjoyed reading it and loved how dominant Fleur was the entire time.

cookiedo

That was definitely a different style and I really enjoyed it. It was more intimate and detailed

Erinnyes

Absolutely loved the writing and descriptiveness, great work with it.

Cateagle

Beautiful and enjoyable story. I loved the interactions and the descriptiveness. Need a sequel where another witch discovers what's going on and demands her turn for silence.

JTC RAGE

This was very well done. I've read some where they go way to hard on describing and it interrupts the flow and takes you out of the story. Great job.

Shane89

Spec-fucking-tacular! I hope this becomes more than a one shot. It is such a great set-up for any possible story.

Joe Smith

Very well done! The only issue is that you did so well most of not all are going to want this to become a whole Fic! Tftc

Joe Smith

Because you them so well

S

A great evolution of your usual style!

tibbs

I really enjoyed it

Robert

Loved it. Would love a follow up!

Celexs

This was a fun read, I would love to see how it would continue!

Hacura

I very much enjoyed the story and the style. It felt like it flowed very smoothly.

Hubert

I have no problem with your "mechanical" style, but this style works as well! It has a potential for a larger story, but I feel you would need to rework it a bit. Then again I enjoyed all your stories and the older ones looked iffy at times and still were enjoyable. I feel like you already evolved since I read your story for a first time, so I have full trust your innovations will be enjoyable!

Kristie Storie

I loved the story! I also love your mechanical style but this was amazing too!! You are a truly talented artist.

Sillywillybilly

I enjoyed this one quite a bit. Found the twist on how the veela allure works fun and refreshing.