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Thrown Back is, well, back. I know it's been a while. I know how I want to get to the end, but I'm not sure on how to end it yet. I've had some really cool fight scenes in this story-at least, I think so-and I don't want the ending to fizzle. If you have any ideas, or thoughts on the story so far, please leave them in the comments. Take care, see you soon!

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Kasikan

Surprised after they announced the mark was a crime to possess they didn't demand everyone to show their arms. Seems like they missed a good opportunity to take out 25 enemies at once. Even if the battle would have been fairly bad. They still could have had the Aurors storm the room and wiped out most of their problems in one move.

Erinnyes

I’ve thoroughly enjoyed this one from start to where it’s at now. It’s one of my favorite time travel stories, and I’m thrilled to see it get picked up again. Really solid chapter, though I admit it’s been long enough I had to skim the past chapters to remember what the ritual was meant to do. 😅

Cody

Glad to see this is back as I quite enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to what happens next.

Kasikan

Sure they can. Most regime changes occur in situations like that. With one side being ambushed completely unaware.

Rhett Sellers

Honestly, Ive enjoyed Molly thinking with her orgasms in recent chapters much more than I thought I would have. Definitely the 'dominant sex with my friends mum' vibes coming in. The question is how far does it go? Personally, I think Harry taking charge of the two and teaching Molly to wear the pants in her relationship with Arthur would be hot from a power dynamics perspective. I mean, Lily has red hair. It might not be too hard to work out safely for the couple. On another front, I do understand and agree with your thoughts of wanting to get the finale right. I feel like Voldemort can fixate on those who disrespect him, so I suspect that he will plan to go after Harry, particularly after the Wizengamot meeting. His thinking will be it that its much easier to sway the body politic when their best have been killed as an example. Much in the way Amelia Bones was killed in canon. It eliminates an obstacle and puts fear into them. I also suspect he will try to show how clever he is and twist one of Harry's inventions to use against him. We see him do that with almost all of his magical advances. Voldemort likes showing his superiority and nothing does that better. Of course, him overlooking something in his desire to show off is also in character. I feel that the girls insisting on helping Harry with his plan, and ultimately pulling his bacon out of the fire in some way vibes with the characters really well. Bella will of course insist that she does the part that keeps her with Harry, but maybe Lily supercedes her on account of the ritual. Narcissa definitely feels more like she prefers to work out of combat even though she would be right there with him. Oh, and more Sylvia and Amanda, please! They're adorable.

dault3883

I feel like the story has lost its plot

Mc54322

Honestly, I think u need to integrate Hermione into this somehow. While I know that u have already done a Hermione omake, I feel like she is too important to not wrap into this ending, as u have mentioned her in the same vein as Harry’s love interests multiple times. It need not be anything romantic or sexual, but even an epilogue scene where Harry somehow manages to track down his old timeline (assuming him coming to the past creates a new timeline instead of deleting the future) and has a brief conversation with her before returning. But that’s just my opinion, u have done well with the story so far, so I’m sure u can handle the ending well. Keep up the good work

Rhett Sellers

I was thinking on a reread of the story, and I definitely think Amanda will probably want to be blood adopted by Harry when she is older. Not that I think she will be treated any differently than her future siblings, but I think she will want Harry to be her 'real' daddy at some point. Usually these types of concerns show up in pre-pubescents or in puberty, so likely around the time she starts Hogwarts, but could be earlier. Often these desires are a result of interacting with other kids who may tease them or be mean to them about it. But I think it would be a lovely little touch to be able to show just how wanted and loved she is now compared to the deadbeat sperm donor who left her and her mother.

Greed7

Just got through binging this from the start again. Can’t wait for the next chapter once you’ve figured out where you’re going with it.

Sillywillybilly

I really like what you have done with this so far. I'm guessing you have already had this thought, but in case you haven't, I think whatever Harry does should either only destroy the smaller soul fragments leaving the main piece of Tom alone so a good fight can happen. Or it could pull all of Tom to wherever Harry performs his magic. Could be interesting to have Tom's soul be forcefully put back together and the backlash of that either killing him, or leaving him weakened for him to be then captured in a fight. With the second option, I think it would be quite funny to have his soul merged back together but have his capacity for mag9c destroyed so he's a squib and can be sentances to azkaban or some other cosmic justice. This option might not be the most exciting though. Regarding the girls, it would be nice to see Rosmerta make an appearance again. While Connie has been mentioned its always been in the background. Could maybe do a two part epilogue that goes over how the relationships end up working with the girls, as in who stays with Harry. The second part could be Harry running into his friends from his timeline when they go to school.

IEU097

Honestly a little surprised they didn't "accidentally" complete the ritual.