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Chapter 10 of To Hell and Back

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nEnVuO2Ev6Wh6zeeGqP74LKle0vkWGITni_NQvu8lG0/edit?usp=sharing

Let me know what you think in the comments and tell me what story you want to see more of next.

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Erinnyes

Wonderful chapter! As to what other stories I’d like to see more of, the obvious choices of “A friend in need” and “Thrown Back” top the list, but I’d also toss out “Slave for You” as one of the less mainstream that is still tons of fun.

Postron

Thanks for the chapter :) More of this please !

Kasikan

I'd definitley like to see the conclusion of Thrown Back next if possible. I'm looking forward to how things progress with this story once he's in the castle and with so many girls all still single there. He'll have a grand time there.

Brian Jordan

A few notes as I read along. Social skills. Harry definitely needs an extended course in social skills. Quite probably best not to have Sirius teach it. (Might not hurt for him to audit the course though. Azkaban did him no favors in many areas, I’m certain.) I'm not saying Harry will start being a proper gentleman after the course but knowing what the rules are and why makes it much easier to make them do what he wants done. “He didn’t see Heather, but he saw Hermione and Heather standing in front of a line of mirrors.” I assume that should be Lilith he didn’t see Fred and George's visit to see Sirius should frighten their parents. Probably several of their siblings as well. I somewhat wish we'd continued the Horcrux hunt but wardrobes did require support and no one seems to be complaining - at least, no one I care about. Please, may we have some more?

Cody

Great chapter and Helping Hand would be nice as I love Harry and Daphne stories and that one was amazing and it hasn't been updated for a bit.

Jonas Kairiūkštis

I haven't read the chapter yet, but for what story I would like to be continued: Dangerous Games (the scene where Narcissa seduces Hermione is still one my of favorites in your works), Falling For Fleur, While The Kids Are Away.

Freddie

Love this chapter. Please keep up the good work it's fantastic.

Sillywillybilly

Really loved the way you did the scenes at the end there. Opens a lot of possibilities for this story. As for what to do next, I love all your stories so you can't really go wrong. I would say that I think a lot of us are eager for the end of Thrown Back and A Friend in Need.

Off My Chest Podcast

Great chapter. One thing that could be an interesting loose thread is that it seemed like Harry finished inside Hermione. That wasn't an issue when he was dead but now that he is alive..... could be an interesting thread to use

thomas cerani

Do you have any update to this story?