More Romance?
- I prefer more romance, drama, & lighter stuff 386
- I like the world building/dark crime stuff, but a bit more condensed. 302
Based on the stats of recent EPs, I was thinking of going back and trimming down the conversation between Grave and Mr. Wolfe. 50 panels of exposition seems too dense, so maybe I can have Grave sum up their convo thru narration and or sprinkle it in later EPs. I'm also considering letting Grave and Ellie date a few times before the kidnapping. So that way, Grave feels much stronger about Ellie and saving her.
The reason why I'm progressing things at break neck speed is because I want to see how people react to the overall story and fix anything that takes way from reader enjoyment. Hopefully, when my audience is satisfied with the story, I'd like to revamp it in full color & flesh things out more with the confidence of knowing that people will stick around.
I was also planning for action scenes where a lot of the violence is either off screen or drawn with black silhouettes. Would you be okay with that or prefer it toned down?
Lastly, I already hinted at it, but would you be opposed to a serial killer playing a prominent role as one of the major antagonists? I don't plan to show any morbid details (their methods are actually unique), but the concept may be too heavy for some. Your thoughts?