Episode 17 - Pt 4 & 5 (Edited) (Patreon)

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I was content with the previous dialogue,, but I realized I'd reach more ppl if I simplified it. some things just can't be made simpler because you risk losing important parts of it, but i think Ellie's message can be reduced while maintaining the core of it and reaching a broader audience. Even though it's difficult for me to rewrite things over & over again, it's a good challenge and I think it'll allow more ppl to enjoy the story.