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I want to end this sex scene on a strong note, so i'm going back and adding a few more pages. I want their first time to be memorable for readers. When the pages are done, I will keep the latest page up, but it won't go in the archive because the panels will be in a different order in the updated pages. 

I always appreciate when you all leave feedback because it helps me to know when something is missing or needs a little more oomph. Thanks Michelle in particular for giving me motivation to go back and try harder to get this right <3

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Chica Conpluma

Best thing I never knew I needed 🤤

jess222315 SN

His face is very expressive - good work! I know the struggle of always trying to make my own work better, so I wish you good luck, but I'm also convinced that you can do it - and, tbh, me, I adore each of your pictures. You're doing exceptionnel work!!👏

Ogechi Ike

Thank you for being open with us! Keep up the amazing work!

Stephanie

I thought of you yesterday! I want to a Conservatory. I took some pictures for you but can't upload

stiffKITTY

There is plenty of oomph. The words and emotions are expressed very well in the eyes, faces and body. Appreciate your dedication and updates.

TinyNomz

Oh...oh wow! I did not know how much I wanted to see that! Most artists leave the the facial expressions of males out of the big O and just show the huge mess they make of their partner. The bigger the mess, the better they liked it, you know? Which is awesome to see and I love it, but IS a bit lacking in emotional depth. This though. This is BEAUTIFUL! Thank you SO much for this!

Lauren

Absolute perfection 😩❤️‍🔥

Miss Rae, if ya nasty

Ahhhh your work is always spectacular but i am super excited to see what you added or switched up im sure it will be perfection lol

Izzy Jones

Such a precious and vulnerable moment with his sweetie 🥹🥹🫶🏿🫶🏿🫶🏿

ajoji_comic

Yes, it is a struggle :'( I've gotten better over time. Now, I'm able to walk away from completed works when I know readers are generally satisfied. I won't torture myself over minute details when patrons are happy~

ajoji_comic

It's challenging because it's different from the woman's expression. Masculine O face requires more subtly I think, and Grave's expression in general are way more subtle because of who he is. I'm happy you like it <3

Amber

I love it ♥️✨

Anna

Grave is just such a beautiful man

emilyyyyyj

Thank you kind author for any and all goodies you give us 💜

Janée Johnson

Fuuuuuuvvck he’s so…. mmmmh 🤤🥺🤎😱❤️‍🔥

Robin Lopez

Wow! I think that he’s never experienced such a beautiful and spiritual experience with another human being. He is so into this moment with his Ellie! It’s so beautiful. He doesn’t want it to end.