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Shakespeare's fifth sonnet is a rather special one. 

I personally love the wintry syntax and the metaphor of a "liquid prisoner," and would love to know what you make of this sonnet too.

Timestamps:

  • 0:00 why the fifth and sixth sonnets are one poem
  • 1:30 why sonnet five is special 
  • 3:00 reading the sonnet together
  • 4:00 what made me fall in love with Shakespeare
  • 5:00 metrical/syntactical metaphors 
  • 6:00 enjambment and spondees 
  • 8:00 "liquid prisoner"
  • 9:00 metaphor as the highest level of thought
  • 11:00 the procreation sequence as overture
  • 11:30 how to rank the sonnets 
  • 13:00 Keats' 'Ode on a Grecian Urn'
  • 14:45 Shakespeare's love of opposites
  • 15:20 the couplet to sonnet five

Sonnet V

Those hours that with gentle work did frame
The lovely gaze where every eye doth dwell,
Will play the tyrants to the very same
And that unfair which fairly doth excel:
For never-resting time leads summer on
To hideous winter and confounds him there;
Sap check’d with frost and lusty leaves quite gone,
Beauty o’ersnow’d and bareness every where:
Then, were not summer’s distillation left,
A liquid prisoner pent in walls of glass,
Beauty’s effect with beauty were bereft,
Nor it, nor no remembrance what it was:
But flowers distill’d, though they with winter meet,
Leese but their show; their substance still lives sweet.

Shakespeare's Sonnet Project

As always, let us know if you have a favourite line, image, or sentiment from this fifth sonnet.

Happy sonneteering!

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Shakespeare's 5th Sonnet (Hardcore Analysis)

0:00 why the fifth and sixth sonnets are one poem 1:30 why sonnet five is special 3:00 reading the sonnet together 4:00 what made me fall in love with Shakespeare 5:00 metrical/syntactical metaphors 6:00 enjambment and spondees 8:00 "liquid prisoner" 9:00 metaphor as the highest level of thought 11:00 the procreation sequence as overture 11:30 how to rank the sonnets 13:00 Keats' 'Ode on a Grecian Urn' 14:45 Shakespeare's love of opposites 15:20 the couplet to sonnet five

Comments

Caroline P

Yipppeeee another sonnet video. No more intelligent comment except to say thank you so much for doing these. I am loving them very very much

Florian Pesantes

As always lagging behind the group like a gimpy soldier: #5 a very cool, detached and elegant sonnet, one doesn’t feel the passion the sequence to the youth oozes. Elegant and artful it seems to me. Especially the two lines you, Benjamin, mentioned, are exciting and extraordinary to my perception. Sap checked…. the sound of it, deliciously popping, snappy like a nailed boot on a marble floor. I love the word sap. I could pronounce it again and again. Then “The liquid prisoner pent in walls of glass”. Without knowledge of #6 I’d even not think of this to refer to procreation. Procreation, a baby growing up to be a man, does not really fit the static, preserved image of the liquid prisoner. I’d have read this distillation of the young man’s beauty rather in the poem than in a living offspring. And who knows, Shakespeare being such a cunning person and writer, maybe the rather crude #6 which clearly demands begetting, insinuates that a son wouldn’t be too bad an idea to preserve this unique beauty but the real eternity will be achieved by the verses that won’t age ever. And so it is. What do we know of the addressee of these sonnets nowadays? Not speaking of the descendants further down the line? But the sonnets are here as fresh, crisp, elegant, seductive and radiant as ever.

hardcoreliterature

You're not lagging at all, Florian :) Snappy like a nailed boot on a marble floor - I love that. You're such a poet yourself, Florian! Beautiful meditation, thank you! As many seem intrigued and compelled to ponder about the addressee, I'm thinking I may read aloud Oscar Wilde's short story on the matter. It's a good one!

Florian Pesantes

Die to themselves. Sweet roses do not so; Of their sweet deaths are sweetest odors made;   And so of you, beauteous and lovely youth;   When that shall vade, my verse distills your truth.