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UNPROTECTED 07 -- Page 13 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-05-20 06:09:36
Edited:
2024-05-22 15:16:40
Imported:
2026-06
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Its always complicated to work on a heavy dialog page. The strugle between adding more dialogs to one page or adding more pages to space the dialogs, but it also can be used to convey chaos or a fast paced moment, make the reader unconfortable or overwelmed by putting it in the shoes of the characters in a moment where too much is happening

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Olaf

I loved how she made the Doc smile with just one comment.

zorro_re
>>138485011

He was so stressed by what he couldn´t do, that he forgot everything he actually did ^^

Amber Dawn

That wet spot looks pretty suspicious. All jokes aside, loving how she's still thinking of others before herself, but girl you need to rest and recover. Listen to Alan and heal up a bit more before you try to go back out.

zorro_re
>>138496206

If you know how scaredy Ambar is and her reactions, you know what that liquid is ^^

Deadhorse

I think you balance the dialogue really well, especially in these moments where you get a glimpse of what's going on beneath the surface. I'm really impressed by the way you use the movement and storytelling and how the dialogue and body language makes it clear that Alan is here as friend as much as Director. Beautiful work.

Copper

So I note some consistent grammatical errors across the comic, ever have anyone offer to clean it up? I'd be happy to.

Ben Bauer

this story is so well written ^-^

zorro_re
>>138543892

Usually Calheb helps me with that. Please let me know any mistake so I can fix it ^^

zorro_re
>>138590774

Thank you! That means a lot to me. I really try to take my time to do it as best I can.

Veydajar

Surprised Ambar didn't just embrace the more compact, ball-less look - considering she explained to Duke how she doesn't care about that part of her (in 3-17).