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first one is tighter words, second is wispy words.

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Danny Joyce

First one is cleaner and at first glance is easier to read. Also being as the title is different the women numeral ii seems out of place e. Just a critical perspective, think it looks great none the less

William

I like the second one more

William

The first one just looks plain

roninmw

First one

Tim

I really do like the second, but it reads as Exalted Pate. Now if it is this is the choice and there are no further changes, First one. If you change the F Second one. If you are making changes, I'd recommend title at top, simply because in the picture the top seems kind of empty, it would also make the II on the side seem more in place. Leave Author's name at bottom.

Mike

First one, for the readers with glasses. Had to get up and go grab reading glasses for the second one : ).

Darkserra

Very nice. I like the first one better.

Psykodoughboy

1 is better because is clearer on mobile