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Alrightie!  We have our final Raptor design for April! CorruptiveJadeMutant/arthro all the way, a mix of feathers and scales with feathery hair, and boobs. Would say she trys her hardest to be good.So our sequence so far:April O'Neil (taking inspiration from the 90s cartoon/video game design) takes a serum and becomes a mutant Raptor (see above!)Finally: our scenario has some room to be fleshed out a bit :)   She takes a serum herself, but...  Elaborate on the inciting scenario for me!

Does it do what she thinks it did?  What was she expecting?  

Was she trying to turn into a mutant raptor?  (or a mutant in general) if so why?  Was this for a news story?  To join her turtle friends on the more exciting action?   How does she react to the changes?

elaborate for me :)I'm not looking for a novel or a page by page breakdown but give me a general scenario.  I reserve final rights to make tweaks if it is TOO specific, but have fun!

 Info:

- You can repeat someone else's answer if you want, it just increases the chances of it being picked

- One suggestion per person 

-  Since I will be randomizing, there is NO LIMIT on the number of suggestions.  I am not limited by a 20-question poll.

I will leave this open until Monday June 11 at Noon CST!

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JourneymanIK

The boys (i.e. the turtles) are cornered, and April has to save them. She'd previously gotten ahold of new experimental mutagen that Krang was going to use to make an army of dino-soldiers. With no other option she doses herself hoping it would give her something to help save her friends. Could add a throwaway line about how Krang was going to discard this formula because while it left the subject intelligent they also still had their free will, or something like that.

Astf

It's a trick by Krang! April thought this would be a cure after being exposed to radioactive waste, but it just speeds up the mutation further!

Daryl Beck

This is shaping up to be a cool sequence, looking forward to seeing the final version.

arania

I agree! I'm looking forward to drawing it!

Master-TF

The question here is: Does she keep her old mind/values? Or does she become another evil creature to fight them? Alright, well here's my scenario: April feels kind of useless when being compared next to the turtles, she decides to find a way to make a potion to make her stronger. The potion however is not what it seems and turns her into this mutant raptor. She freaks out and hates it at first, but the serum slowly makes her love it as she craves more.

werewolf_hunter20

hostage to lure in the turtles then turned to a minion to help fight/demoralize them

arania

although this is a little tricky with her having taken the serum herself? Would you like to make a suggestion/modify?

werewolf_hunter20

maybe lied that she was poisoned and serum is the antidote?

arania

Closed and rolling!