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We're closing in on the final details of our fun sequence!  So far, we have:Spunky young female boxer in training determined to make an impact transforms into Female Buff anthro kangarooVia: Her rival puts a spell on her, hoping she would be disqualified from the tournament.This gives us a lot of leeway for details, though!

So now Write-in SOME SEQUENCE DETAILS!I will likely pick a number of then that I like that don't contradict each other.  This could be anything from details about the rival, why a kangaroo form, what her reaction to the change is, a particular image you want to see, a focus on a particular part of the change (ie, a comic page showing the feet TF), if the curse is permanent or not or triggered by something, etc etc etc.  Limitations: more than one character over many pages will ultimately shorten the sequence, and so the scope of this sequence is just one character transforming.I plan on putting up one final question with details about our starting character (appearance, name, etc) - so if you have an idea for that, hold off until next question :)

Have fun - and I'll look forward to seeing your ideas!I'll take suggestions until MONDAY DEC 27 (I'll start on the sequence that morning)

Comments

Thorncalibur

This is dependent on whether the rival is present when she is transforming and it is a direct confrontation, but a suggestion for the final image could be the boxer in an action position possibly about to or is throwing a punch at her rival as "thanks" for placing the spell on her. I would imagine though that this would mean the rival would not be prepared for what the spell was going to do and/or especially the boxer's reaction.

Cydra

I hadn't really expected my suggestion to be picked, but I may as well add my opinion. The rival cast that spell because they hoped the boxer would appear to be cheating (like using steroids) and end up disqualified. Things probably didn't happen like the rival anticipated.

HumanimalZoo

Starts off with shock but then realizes how strong she is and how springy her tail is. I’d so love a sequence showing her thick tail pushing down her spandex shorts and then her sitting on it like a chair :)

HumanimalZoo

And as a follow up, it could be like an airbud movie scenario, “well there isn’t a rule against a kangaroo lady boxing”

Reverb

Arania: "and who knows, maybe it was a mistake spell, or maybe the what wasn't specified - that's for you all to help me with the next few questions" reverb: "Maybe something along the line of inner spirit animal?"

DTMMP

Same deal as last time. Feel free to use my suggestions, make changes, or ignore them. You can assume that this is my default stance. Despite the amount I write sometimes, I'm not usually very picky about it.

DTMMP

I'd like to see a part where she pulls open her pouch, giving a good view of her new pouch teats. I feel like those are usually overlooked when it comes to kangaroos.

DTMMP

Since it's not specified, I don't imagine her rival as another boxer. I imagine her rival as someone that she has known and butted heads with since they were children. I like the idea that her rival only does this to mess with her, and *not* because *she* wants to win the tournament herself.

DTMMP

The rival casts the spell on the day before the tournament, while the protagonist is training alone. The rival also needs to be present to cast the spell. She only intends for the spell to last a couple of days. Just long enough for her to get disqualified. Again, shes only trying to mess with her. The rival isn't such a bad person that she would want to ruin the protagonists life and crush her dreams forever. But... Either the rival overlooks something, or something happens that makes it permanent.

DTMMP

For overlooking something... It could be that all of the warnings are at the start of the spell book, While she only read the page with the spell itself. That page only contains a vague description of the spell and the amount of time it takes to decay: 2 days. Meanwhile, the first fifty pages contain all of the warnings: CAUTION: THIS IS A BOOK OF CURSES! SPELLS ONLY DECAY IF THEY AREN'T SEALED! THE MOST COMMON WAY TO SEAL A TRANSFORMATION SPELL IS THROUGH ORGASM! As soon as the rival sees that something is going wrong, she starts flipping through the book. Despite their rivalry, she does actually care about the protagonist, and wants to fix her mistake. Unfortunately, the protagonist orgasms right as the rival finds that page. It doesn't have to be an orgasm that seals the spell of course. You could swap that out for something else if you want. Giving in to some instinctual response maybe? I don't know.

DTMMP

For something unexpected happening... The spell could have two parts. The first part transforms her. The second part remains active, waiting two days before changing her back. The rival has a necklace with a crystal attached. This crystal nullifies magic. As the transformation completes, the protagonist demands to be changed back while grabbing the rival by the collar of her shirt. In doing so, her hand touches the crystal, nullifying the second half of the spell and making the change permanent.

DTMMP

After the change, the rival starts to cry. She didn't mean for this to happen. The protagonist *was* going to kick her ass for doing this to her... but seeing her like that, so upset, she has a different urge. She pulls her rival in for a kiss. The rival reciprocates, and they both realize what their rivalry was really about.

Reverb

I imagine her being surprised and shocked in reaction to her transformation when she first notices what’s happening to her as one might expect someone to be and as I’m sure you’ve done in other sequences.