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Thanks to everyone for their patience. What do you think, Fuutaro is right or wrong?

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mrG4bka

pages 6 and 9 minor typos. I hope Hina-chan won't experience too much of an existential crisis. We have confirmation of your words that she's already come to terms with who she is. And to answer the question: The sentence spoken by Hina-chan on page 6 is probably a good summary. Fuutaro/Mutsumi probably doesn't fully realize what he really wants. But I could be wrong here and I could be missing something. That's just my opinion.

Ron512

Can you write me more precisely where I went wrong? English is not my native language and I don't always understand everything.

mrG4bka

Sure ☺ page 6: top left panel, word - "minie". page 9. I don't remember her name or whether she is aware that Mutsumi is Fuutaro (that blonde girl), but shouldn't she say "She" instead of "He"?

Ron512

Corrected, thanks. And that girl is Asuna-chan, she's no one special, she's just Mutsumi-chan's friend in this reality.

LTheWafflePWN

Ahh, the cliffhanger ending!!?! Great chapter as always, excited to see how things continue to develop 😉