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Super Dragon Ball Heroes: Kale (Page 1-2-3) (Patreon)

Published:
2024-03-20 07:15:01
Imported:
2026-06

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Hi everyone, thanks for the patience. I post this first three pages available for everyone for this week, while from the next we will continue with the usual format. I really thanks DBz for making such an amazing work as I always wanted to see this comic come to life since I readed the manga. I also thanks 不動心 for his help and feedbacks about the translation of the story.

As mentioned this comic is an All-Age format (both in English and Japanese) and will be split in two part due to its lenght, I am sorry for those wanted to see this story in an NSFW format and I promise I will do better next time. Still I am really glad to be able to share with you the spotlight which Kale and Kamin have always deserved and I hope you all are gonna enjoy this amazing pages.

After being separated from Cabba and Caulifla, Kale is confronted by the fearsome Kamin, Neo-Mutant Machine. As the fight continues Kale is increasingly at a disadvantage, will she be able to defeat her opponent and reunite with his companions?

Art by DBz (if you like this story I really suggest to follow him

https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/3437513

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Scorpion08

ohhh, this comic looks interesting, I know it's a bit hasty to ask but, do you plan to make a continuation of this comic focused on Caulifla? If so, one thing I would like to see would be to see Kale and Caulifla, still possessed, merging and forming Kefla.

ParasiteLovers

Hi, honestly I was think at this options too😅. I took interest in Caulifla too and I would like to see a sequel. For going better I will do in the future a pool where I ask their opinions about this story and if both peoples want and the artist is interested too, I will propose a comic for Caulifla and Oren. I am looking for a Kelfa story too just to know if the artist will be ok as he is really meticulous with the stories to look more canon, so it could be or a What If or even an original story

wpone

I think this work will be very fun. Are you releasing 3 pages every week?

ParasiteLovers

Honestly I was thinking two pages a week, I could increase If I am able to promote this comic to new supporters on social. If you know people interest in a story like this one please feel free to share it with them (even through social) if you want. I would like that people could enjoy this story and with their feedbacks I will elaborate a sequel much better

trentrouls

Oooh, i love this style! Obviously from previous comments, ive wondered what its be like for pan instead of trunks to be possessed by baby, but another idea that isnt often explored would be, buu absorbs pan in the baby sage to hide them, happens in the anime, but no physical changes occur. A neat one shot would be if there were changes!

ParasiteLovers

Oh Buu transfomation after absorbing Pan is intersting, I never tought about. I could think to this for Buu related projects

trentrouls

Isnt it just? I mean unlike the baby thing, which is a unique scenario, this happens in gt! They just do nothing with it

ParasiteLovers

Maybe because that wasn't a truly absorption as Pak was conscious

trentrouls

That, or they didnt want to make a new char design for like 3 episodes before buu goes poof

ParasiteLovers

Possible then I think we should intervene about😅

Luis

You should post this on deviantart and pixiv it will definitely attract more people!!

ParasiteLovers

I posted the pages. I hope people will be interest to support us as I am really thinking about a comic with Kefla possessed, especially after seeing the trailer of Sparking Zero today

ParasiteLovers

Still let me know your impression on the story in the next weeks. I really appreciate your feedbacks

Scorpion08

Oh I see, I think it has nothing to do with the post, but I would like to know how you plan the comics, if you first make a written script of what is going to happen and then take care of the drawings, or do you do it all at the same time? And if, since you've been making the comic, you've thought about a possible continuation of the story?

ParasiteLovers

I usually write down a plot, I will discuss with the artist then I write down a full script. As the artist draw the sketch I work on other things than I will color the comic. This is the case for the Baby comic

ParasiteLovers

For the sequel I start to think about it when I finish the script and after I read your ideas and I try to integrate those