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A while back I asked if folks would be interested in reading longer stories with more emphasis on plot and characters, and the response was overwhelmingly in favor. So here's the start of something I've had on my mind since last summer, a detective noir story about a stolen shrink ray.

As a work in progress, I may end up going back and changing details and rearranging story as it comes together. This could end up being novella-length. I figure I'll work on it on and off in between my many other projects, depending on the response I get. So let me know what you think! But, as usual, I reserve the right to not care about responses and do what I want. Enjoy!

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Pohato

I read it and it sounds pretty good. Keep at it.

Pohato

I know how difficult it can be to write a novel. (I am currently attempting to write a dark fantasy novel myself.) You can do this. Never give up.

Ari Reman

I love this start. You know how to set a scene, and can’t beat an homage to classic noir. I think we all know what that device does :-)