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Hey, guys!

So here is the monthly preview of the next book!

The cover isn't quite ready yet, but here's the sketch! New working title, not many results on Amazon.

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Spectre

I like the cover and the new working titel. I‘m looking forward to it. 😊

ArK

I just finished the preview and I'm excited about the new book. The thing with Zae's tattoo also gives the story a nice twist. Great job Sarah!

Glitch

I finished the preview and it was great! Zae making herself relearn the bow is a nice touch. The cover sketch is lovely! The shadow wolf has the power to censor chests, oh noes! D:

Uppercase

In the second chapter, near the end of the first section, a quote from Retine is oddly broken up. "You are nothing," Retine said. "Here, you must earn your place among the faithful." Not anymore" And you never will be, not unless you earn it." That's verbatim from the book, with two end quotes, and there is no subject for the verb. Before that, Jewel is stating that she is the crown princess, and Retine interrupts her. It looks like there might have been a deleted line from Jewel claiming she was something else, like a free woman, or entitled to make her own decision, and then Retine says 'not anymore.'